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for Lust

by skeyeta

person blisblop
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic.The characters are in charadter,the setting is moody and the interplay between the bros is facinating.Sasuke's kinda clueless but that makes it better Itachi isn't a cartoon monster here.Very sexy.can't wait for more.Kudos.
person Kasey Sanada
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Really good! I hope you continue!!
person Absolute--
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaah...Will we ever see what happens at 'home'?
Because, personally, I think that Itachi X Sasuke is THE best pair...But, this was quite interesting...Nicely written.
person Tamara
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a very cool story
lol i never wouldn't seen Neji as a stripper but you wrote it will enough for me to see it
please update soon!
person Sintari
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh girl. Why have you never written smut before? WHY!?! This was too hot to believe, seriously. The blow job killed me. But anticipation is killing me even more - what's Itachi going to do? You know my vote - molest him, Itachi! Sasuke knows he wants it even if he doesn't precisely "know" - if that makes any sense. And as usual, even though this is smutty, it still retains your usual high standards in writing, character development and plot. Where's the rest? I want it NOW.
person Sasuke
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story a lot. It is well written. Please, continue it , I would love to see what happen. Watashi no rusi wa suki desu!!!
person kawaii_kitsune_thief
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Very interesting. Uchihacest? Either way, I was looking for a sasunaru, but I like this. Continue soon please.
person kayoko
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kyaaa!! XD

naruto-bashing...=/ but..yummmy uchihacest (hints)!

loved it lots...i want to see if itachi gives sasuke a present~

neji as a stripper..haha..the hair!~


thank you
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You're giving me a nosebleed! *takes out some clenex*

Heh, I like it. ^^

(Honestly, I always love Uchihacest and Neji is quite hot but this fic is really well-written.)

More please!