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for Bloody Nocturne

by chesierecat

person minase-chan
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! You update! *dances around in joy* Can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder what Itachi would do. I hope he won't punish Sasuke too bad. Nah, on second thought, I hope he does punish him! XD~
person Momo
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good. I love it. Full of lovely SasuNaru and ItaSasu. Hopefully some ItaNaru as well. Hehe, the way you've written the vampire plot is great! Have a stick of pocky for your hard work.
person kkkkkkkkkkk
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I didn't notice that this story was updated at first, otherwise I would have reviewed earleir. The story looks like it's leading up to something--Itach idoesn'[t strike me as the type to share easily. Though, in the summary on FF.Net, you said that this story was a foursome. Do you mean that as in a four-way, or as in a love square sort of way? I'm a little confused with that.
person Saske\'s Iris
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah an update! Poor Sasuke under his brothers watch all the time he just can't get a break to have fun like the other vampires. Like the relationship him and naruto are forming though, silent arrogance vs unrelenting cheer who will win?
hummm wonder what the older uchica is going to do to sasuke fight him for nauto or will it become naruto fighting to liberate sasuke from his brother.
person blisblop
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Screams with joy and punches air.Yesssss.Its back!I like Itachi as a mastif,hmm,not perminatly of course...they are all gonna be together in one room and that is what I am looking forward to.Yells again,just for the hell of it.
person blisblop
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What is Itachi going to do?Capture them all,god I can't wait.I love Ita /Sas but all of them together sounds heavenly.
person Zika Silver1
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really really really good! I love this so much, both the writing style and the story itself.

er, just a note on the whole breathing thing: you need to breath in order to talk. Vampires probably don't need air to 'live', but they most likely need air to form words, like the rest of us (sound waves and voice and such), which can also lead to the delusion of being 'alive'. Thus, since Sasuke is talking, he would be breathing ^.^ okay, writer's mini-lecture done

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE write more, okay?
person Kai
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read your other story and so I read this one, too! This is really really good!
Please please continue!!!!!
Love it!
Kai
person maya
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is soooooo interesting! Please, please, update soon! I am dying to know what happens.
person Liliath
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa....O_O...loving this fic so much...whoaa.....UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!