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for Bloody Nocturne

by chesierecat

person T.K-kun
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHOO! i wonder what sasuke has in store for naruto! i really can't wait to
find out what'll happen in the future. XO gyaaah! i hope you update soon!
love your story very much!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update -- I can't wait to find out what happens with Naruto and Sasuke, as well as what Kakashi's and (more importantly *wink*) Itachi's reactions are. ^^ keep up the good work!!!
person DeadUchiha
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW!!!!! NO! It was just getting good!!! WAAAAAAAAAAH! Sigh. Another beautiful job with this chapter! As always, i can't wait for more! About the "breath" thing...Ha...i didn't even notice it...*Wonders if Sasuke's breath is smelly...Bla! i won't think about that...* I liked how you described the brothers Uchiha watching the sunset from the castle...very nice! What is it about angst that is just so appealing??? Bah! who cares! I'll be waiting patiently for your next installment...*I hope Kakashi doesn't spoil the fun betwen Naru and Sasu...Ahhhh!* ~snuggles~ d(^-^)b
person kawaii kitsune-kun
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAAA! >.< Damn, I guess I haven't really got over that SasuNaru obssession of mine after all.... *sighs* I get all hyped up everytime I see something like this.... I LOVE THE CHAPTER CHESIERE-CHAN! The ItaSasu (kinda) scene was so kawaii! YAY SASU-CHAN IS HELPING NARUTO! (>.< I'm just typing crap here...) Hehe hope you don't mind ^^ Looking forward to the next update! (It doesn't matter if it's for this one or the feudal Japan one that you were talking about....)
person kijo kasumi
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you might be right, you might be wrong on the whole vampie breath thing but who in the hell cares any way right?! its a fanfics. and plus it makes one hell of a storie that keeps people coming back to. especially to read the updates. ^_^ i know i do.
person Lermbay
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your writing style. Its so suspenseful and detailed. I cant wait for the next chapter to come up. =^.^= Keep up the great work.
person Zika_Silver1
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really really good! If this is the style that comes from writing in Thai, I encourage it! The story could use a little work on grammar, but it's not a lot.
**drools** pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease write more!!!
person Kusachu
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"That moment, the image of another boy was seen overlying the grinning blue-eyed blond. A boy with jet black hair and deep obsidian eyes under a large odd-looking goggle. They were so different yet so similar."

AAAAHHHHHHH!!!!! OBITO SAMA!!!!! WOOHOO!!!!! *Happy dance! Happy dance!*

Oh sorry! Hehehee...Obito just gets me all excited...Man, i'm really hoping you will mention him some more in this story, but *sigh* guess that would be asking too much since i'm guessing he's probably very dead right now...*sigh*

Well, there were a few grammer errors, but nothing too distracting...I still love this story to pointy bloody death! I wish that i wouldn't have found it until you were finished so i could just read all at once!! Ahhh!

Really, this story is really really good!! I was sad at the lack of the brothers Uchiha in this chapter, but that's just me being selfish...hee hee...and it's not like you didn't MENTION an Uchiha...*Obito Sama**Squeeee!!!*

Please work hard to get that next chapter out soon! I'm foaming at the mouth here! Laters! d(^-^)b
person MultifacetedTune
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! You updated!!! *glomps* Go you!!! ^___^ I absolutely loved the last couple of chapters -- this fic gets better ever time I read it!!! ^^ Okay, that was a stupid thing to say....... *blames it on the meds* Gods, I hate being sick....... though it is nice to be able to "skip school" and read all day long......... ^___~ Keep up the good work and update ASAP, k? Ja ne!!!
person hogo-chan
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
effing awesomeness!