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for Bloody Nocturne

by chesierecat

person Liliath
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOSH!!!loving this fic and I cat wait for yet another great chapter^^ also...MUAHAHAHAHA...MORE ITASASU ITANARU AND SASUNARU ACTION!!!! and...of course...KAKANARU!!!!!!!!XDDD
person Namine
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*puts cherry on top* ok, done! XD
anywaiz...GREAT STORY, DON'T STOP WRITTIN IT, PLZ!!! :D
person blisblop
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dance..happy dance...sooo happy dance!YOU WROTE!So sorry,just *sobs* so happy. I really enjoy the cadence and setting(emotional) of this peice.It is very sensual and full of longing.And it has Itachi-sama so I am ...so happy...
person blisblop
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dance..happy dance...sooo happy dance!YOU WROTE!So sorry,just *sobs* so happy. I really enjoy the cadence and setting(emotional) of this peice.It is very sensual and full of longing.And it has Itachi-sama so I am ...so happy...
person Anon
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting. when's the next chapter coming out???
person DeadUchiha
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this chapter tuned out great!! there were a couple of spots that came out a little wierd but they were not at all distracting d(^-^)b This story is great! I love it! It's actually written quite beautifuly and has that mysterious dark quality that just makes me squeel with delight! You really create a beautiful mental picture with the way you write....(pictures and old european town with cobblestone streets and what not...) Terribly entertaining!!! Please work hard and get that next chapter out soon!!! Oh and I love Kakashi!!! the way you use him in the story is just pefect and it suits him! I'm seeing some possible problems coming up with possessive Itachi and sweet little Sasuke....can't wait to see how that turnes out!!! Okay i'm done babbling.....keep up the great work!!!~~~~~~~~d(^-^)b *two thumbs up!*
person Kusachu
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hee Hee....me again....Just wanted to add that you are superb at writing the vampire element!!! very delicious!!! *YUMY!*
person vampchic
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
for a translation piece, this is really great stuff. you had better not stop writing! that would upset way too many people! like me!XP
person hogo-chan
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your fic is amazing! please please please update as soon as you can! ^_^
person Liliath
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
couldn't be better, this chapter, that is^^ cool, awesome, superb, great, nice, the best, man....but definetelly your story rocks!!!!^^ YAY!!!>< UPDATE SOON LUV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^