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for Pointless

by Akirei

person Choister
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool, a tad cheesy, and deary. Exactly the type of thing you're supposed to find on a porned-out creative writing site. Too bad we're not still in the nineteen-ninetys. Four gold stars. =)
person Demon
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW...that was *passes out from blood loss*
person harukakatana
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol God, Mistee, way to show me your stuff before you post it. =p Hot as hell, rawr
person celticfx
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes! I get to review first! Anyway, wow! Very hot! *sweats* I loved the interaction between the two. Very well written and easy to follow. Are you going to continue this?? If not please write some more SasuNaruSasu!! This is one of the best I've ever read!!!
person Sukara
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo!! Seconed post!! o3o, anyways, please continue this or make more of SasuxNaru!! ^_^ Keep up teh great work!! ^_^


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