rate_review Reviews

This is such a tragically beautiful story. It's a shame to know that it will never be finished. JadeTiger, if you ever read this just know that I really love this story.

oh my gosh! poor (dream fox) Naruto!!! :(


Ok, I just wanted you to know that I sat through and read your story in one sitting and I absolutely loved it. The dream torture deaths and the following insomnia were great plot points and for someone who claims they can't write for shit (or even in legible English) your story is pretty freaking awesome. My heart really went out for Naruto when he made the startling realization that he was alone and I even sighed an "awww" when he had fallen asleep on Sasuke's leg. ^^ I think you have alot going on in this story and I'd love to see its conclusion. ( I found this via the search function of AFF, so I have no idea how old it is or if it even still updates, but I hope it still is, because its really good. )

Keep up the good work. I look forward to your next chapter.

I hope you will update, now that this place seems to be steady right now, I really like your fic a great deal and love the enteraction betweent Sasuke and Naruto. Your story has a lot of caringness in it and angst to make it exciting to read. Please write some more.

O.O oh wow oh wow oh wow! Man that was crazy! that chapter had my skin crawling! Poor Naruto! I really want to find out what's wrong with him! This is a great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

great story so fare keep it up

this is one f the best Naruto storys I have ever read, I hope you'll update soon.
poor little naruto, I hope your nightmare will dissaper soon. I wonder why naruto has them... please tell me soon

I like the way the progress is in the story, if there are going to be a sasuke/naruto part I can't tell, but if it is, I'm please that you take sutch a long time for someting to happen between them. but I'm hoping something will happen...
keep on writng (^_^)/

SHIT! You're giving Naruto one hell of a past life!!! Jeeze after being skinned and eaten alive by ants you think you could go a bit easy on him?! o.0; Jeeze.....All in all i say it would make a great movie..lol Really it sounds like some sort of horror movie....I hope that the holiday is ovrer soon so he can get some help from someone....

omg... i love this fic!!!! pleasepleaseplease update soon! I really really love it so no real constructive help. except in that last chapter its 'coagulating' blood not colligating i think. im not sure how i thought that while reading it but oh well, i love it!

Wow...
That was very... intresting.
I can't wait to read more.
Please update soon. ;_;

...holy fuck.......
I LOVE YOU! This story is so angsty, and graphic (the ant part made me shiver). You are an uber writer (though things are sometimes to dramatic, and there are some grammar issues) please hurry up and finish the next chapter, I cannot wait!