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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plz update!! this is really gooood!!!! >.<
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow your story is so detailed and i was so engrossed in it that i didn't even notice the time. you are very talented. please continue and update soon.
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-just read it again- Man! I gotta know what happens next! I hope you update soon. This story is really creative, I've never read anything with a plot like this. :)))) yayay! ^_^ My hero. -gives you cookies-
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn.... what a place to leave off on. ... Very good. Keep up the excellent plotline. Looking forward to the next update. Ja!
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*whistles* What a way to end a chapter. Rather gruesome but I suppose it should be.
Prayers are with you and your family,
Phoe-chan
Prayers are with you and your family,
Phoe-chan
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry to hear about all the bad stuff going on. I hope it get better for you soon.;_; That chapter was very creepy. >.< I hope naruto tells someone about this and that they can help him.
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. just, wow. i mean, damn dood. that was the most disgusting thing i've ever read! you really enjoy harming small animals don't you? lol j/k. that was SUCH a short chap *whimpers* but it seems u've had a lot of things to deal w/ IRL and that definitely comes before this. Sorry to hear about ur dad, i hope he is ok. when something goes wrong, it comes in waves and crashes down on ya, doesn't it?
anyways, i hope the next chap is longer and comes out more quickly. this story is still in the beginning, you have much more to go! until then, matane!
anyways, i hope the next chap is longer and comes out more quickly. this story is still in the beginning, you have much more to go! until then, matane!
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wooow I like this! I hope you update soon... I feel so sorry for poor Naruto ;_;
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Very descriptive and it sounds extemely painful. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to see more of your story. I really enjoy reading it. ^_^
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thanx for updating!! (^___^)
i've been waiting for this chapter for a while and now i can't wait for the next one!! (>_<) its really good!
i've been waiting for this chapter for a while and now i can't wait for the next one!! (>_<) its really good!