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by JadeTiger

person BloodAndChocolate
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O ... <.< I'm a little scared of you now. That was so painful T.T poor lil fox. Does this mean Naruto dies? ~Blood
person MultifacetedTune
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh...My God........Shit. *shudders* Damn, I'm gonna' have nightmares now. XP Thanks for the update, and keep up the good work!!! *shudders again* Dear lord........ ^^
person Jadejj
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear about your problems hope it gets better for you soon and good chapter and poor fox...
person DazeWolf
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XDD Nya! That's so cool! It's like "*readreadread*Aww, poor fox...*readreadread* EVIL MEN! EVIL! *readreadreadreadreadread* *GASP* ZOMG Gaiz....his ankle..."
That is so cool! You've got a really great idea going here. I can't wait for more of your lovely story! XDD
person DazeWolf
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha. I love Naruto's ranting. I can just imagine him sitting there blabbing on about every little thing he did. XDD I wouldn't be able to stand that so early in the morning. >> But then again I'd probably be the one ranting...XDD

O.o I used to watch...eh...I don't remember what it was...some little kids t.v. show with- Oh yea! It was like...Lunette the Clown..or something like that. And after seeing it I always believed dust bunnies were actually little bunnies made of dust that formed under your couches O.o Children's television teaches me nothing.

"so pack light, but pack right"

XDD That's one of those cute 'lil rhyming things moms make up that they think are funny but really aren't! XDDD Haha. Man, I love those.

I love your descriptions. They really place me right there in your story. ^^ Wonderful. I can't wait to read the rest. XD
person Anon
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XDDD And here I was about to ask why Kakashi didn't notice Naruto's troubled sleep. ^^ You think of everything, ne? XDD

Haha. That's awesome. ^^ I love your story so much. *goes on to read the next chappy*
person BloodAndChocolate
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O omg, locked in a library, that's scary. <_< being skinned alive-even scarier. I hate rich people that make clothing out of real animals, it's cruel. I feel bad for Naruto. Anyway, I like you story, it's great. The plot is interesting, the slight lil Sasuke/Naruto fluff was cute. As far as I can see, nothing's wrong with your story, so I hope you continue updating it.

~Blood(not signed in)
person KuraResa
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. It's very descriptive and well written. Can't wait to see what happens next.
person Jadej.j
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my what's next? hope to read the next chapter soon
person Biokinetic
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm, I liked this chapter. Its been awhile since you last updated and Im happy you finally caught up^_^
This chapter reminds me of personal experiences being in a library. I just sit there for hours and hours and hours and read and reread and sometimes take a break to watch out the window and during all this time people just get their books, leave, and I never move. Its like watching the world go by and all the books smell dusty and old and if you go into the sections with all the dictionaries and reader's digest novels they're always covered in dust and untouched and no one goes in that section and yeah...I know my library inside and outO_o;
Maybe you wrote this from personal experience?
Ne ways, great job! Keep up the good work.