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for Bygones and Bylines

by twistedsheets

person vivacious
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you make me blush! the bathroom scene was getting hot. i can't wait to read the next chapter. i love weiss and viewfinder. i see naruto as ken and sasuke as aya with a lil bit of yohji that naruto brings out. anyways great plot, can't wait to see what happens.
person ghostninja85
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ummmm. *Dodges angry glares*

I've been around... Just you know, not here. I'm halfway through chapter 9, but I got a little sidetracked. They're called all of Bleach and Hunter X Hunter. I'll be back soon, I'm almost done.

Although I will admit that the scene was hot, I hope someone comes in to save Naruto. Isn't Neji supposed to be watching over him?

Also there are quite a few interesting questions you've brought up in this chapter. I can't wait to find out the answers.

Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person ST
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
looks good!
person Anon
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My reaction when reaching the bottom of the page... "what? there's only one chapter?!" this story definately left me wanting more, can't wait to see an update!
person ayachan
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg, wow! this is so good! please update asap!!!!!
person hogo-chan
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my gawd! that rocked! what an interesting way to start off the story! I love it so much! *squeals* please update super fast!
person akuma_river
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. I have fallen in love with this much of a story. Keep up the excellent work. coolsa.
person kilini
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! This fic is amazing...
person silverfox
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting, love it cant wait for the next chapter so update soon

UNTIL NEXT TIME BYE BYE
person tsu
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another original story plot! *does happy dance* I hope you update soon. Good fics are getting rare these days... Lets see more Sasuke floundering and less Naruto blundering!