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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's really interesting...hope you update soon!
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This story is SO good! Your writing style is really beautiful and you write with a very graveful flow that I wish I could do! Also, I love this plot. It's really original and creates a very suspenseful air that draws the reader in. Please update quickly! I beg you! ^-^
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE!MORE!
I wanna read more!!
>.<
This is REALLY good!!
Please update soon^^
I wanna read more!!
>.<
This is REALLY good!!
Please update soon^^
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, I like your AU, and I can see Naruto as a journalist quite easily. Well written too, you were able to hint at things without giving them away. Can't wait to find out what happens, update soon please!
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tease. Update soon please so I can leave a real review ^_^ Very interesting concept though!
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!
Personally I'm a big fan of OOC's simply because they tend to be written better.
But you have also managed to mantain the core personalities of the characters in this very different setting.
I LOVE IT!!!!
I like this them and idea, ------ IT'S DIFFERENT!!! YAAAAA!!!!!
which is rare and very refreshing.
any hoo, as far as writing style types or constructive critique my best advice for tis fic is to keep up with what you're doing. You seem to have a clear idea of where this is going and am really looking forward to the next chapter.
---Madussa
Personally I'm a big fan of OOC's simply because they tend to be written better.
But you have also managed to mantain the core personalities of the characters in this very different setting.
I LOVE IT!!!!
I like this them and idea, ------ IT'S DIFFERENT!!! YAAAAA!!!!!
which is rare and very refreshing.
any hoo, as far as writing style types or constructive critique my best advice for tis fic is to keep up with what you're doing. You seem to have a clear idea of where this is going and am really looking forward to the next chapter.
---Madussa
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 1)
Cool idea. I totaly agree with Naruto being a journalist; it really suits him. Heh, and Sasuke as a business man. Yup!^^
Mmm.. Weiss Kreuz is one of my favorite animes ever. So yummy. [Yhoji is my beyatch!^^]
Hmm... Naruto and Sasuke sparred? I don't understand the connection between the past to the present, I hope that will be smoothed out in the next chapter. I don't understand what's going on in the least.
Anyway, I'm looking forward for the next update,
Until then,
Ja ne~
Cool idea. I totaly agree with Naruto being a journalist; it really suits him. Heh, and Sasuke as a business man. Yup!^^
Mmm.. Weiss Kreuz is one of my favorite animes ever. So yummy. [Yhoji is my beyatch!^^]
Hmm... Naruto and Sasuke sparred? I don't understand the connection between the past to the present, I hope that will be smoothed out in the next chapter. I don't understand what's going on in the least.
Anyway, I'm looking forward for the next update,
Until then,
Ja ne~
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes a continue should definietly
follow ^_^
It's a really good start on a fresh
and new story^^ YAY MORE
follow ^_^
It's a really good start on a fresh
and new story^^ YAY MORE
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like how da fic is going. can't wait to see wat sasuke is going to do to poor lil naru-chan next chapter. i love your title. please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. It's original. So keep going....The story is interesting, so I'll be waiting your update. Hope it will be soon.....=)