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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
argh, you are a fan of Viewfinder too? darn, that manga was so HOT! not long ago, i also got the idea to adapt the Naruto gang to yaoi manga storyline too like Viewfinder, The Boys Next Door and Deep flower, but I got lazy...heh heh, anyway, you have got yourself a good start! quite well-written, do continue then. UPDATE!!!
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, this story has promise. Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your story rocks! I love the storyline and the coupling! (scratch out the het but what do I know?) anyway once (or if I can) I figure out how to fav stories here, I'm soooooooooooooo going to fav yours! ^o^ (Or I can try on ff.net...) From the time Naruto called Sasuke, I knew Sasuke might have a little plan or something (well, I think that for every story but I turn out right most of the time!^___^)
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this is really good. Just like your other stories *hint hint*
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sounds really good!!! nice and forceful!! *snickers at the naughty images that line conjured up* i cant wait to find out why naruto is so against seeing sasuke. very much looking foward to the next chapter. ^_^
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is different, sort of. The grammar's good, but plot seems kind of vague.
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start! I think that this plot is very original, and I am really looking forward to future chapters. Also, spelling and grammar where very well done. Its good to see you writing Naruto fanfiction again!
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. Seems to have possiblity. I hope to see it continue.
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the start of this fic. Please update soon! I'm hooked!
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wai!!!!!!!! one of the best fanfics ir eadin awhile ^_^ Keep up the good work, ne? ^_6
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