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by twistedsheets

person -
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am really liking the plot. However, I could really do without all the other pairings...-.-; I could do without Sasuke too as a matter of fact lmao. I hate Sasuke! Die you f-in moron! Yes, yes, Sasuke, you're the moron. *hugs her Naruto poster* I love you Naruto-chan *blushes*
*coughs* So, definitely update quickly. I love storylines like these that are AU but captivating! And make Naruto kick the Uchiha's butt...don't make it an incestual story *shudders* i HATE (ABHOR!!!!!!!!!!!! beyond belief) ItaSasu 0.0; Errrrr yeah :) ok! lol GOOD JOB great flow in the story...keep writing eh :P
person kawaii_kitsune_thief
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.M.G. This is awesome! I love the way you personified everyone and I'm loving the storyline, particularly the way you put Naruto at Sasuke's mercy.
person Iceheart
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was awesome. OMG!!! you are using viewfinder as inspiration?? Damn, you should have made Naruto get "captured" by Sasuke like how Takaba got
captured by Asami.<333 Hope to see an update soon.