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PLease update soon!!! CLIFF HANGERS ARE BAD!!!!! but is it me or did sasuke actually show a little bit of jealousy and sorta let it slip in the last chapter hwere he pulls naruto into the limo *which i may add was one of my favorite scenes in the chapter!!*.......but yea PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! and keep up the good work!

gee... been waiting a long time for your update!
it's a nice one!
but, i dont really get the chapter before (stupid me)....

I like the way you built sasuke's character, it's dark and possesive and tricky, they're good for naruto.

hope you wont make naruto surender to sasuke so easily, i know he's still in love but i like it when he puts up a lot of fight to 'fight' sasuke.
thanks!!!!!

OH MAN!!!!

i just find out that this fic was inspired by VIEWFINDER (i'm sorry u'm so slow....)...
dude, i love it so much!!!!!
i love your fic even more now....

will you present a character like fei long in this fic????

keep up the good work!!! love you!!!!

Oooo... I love your story ^^ Can I know what's the pairings?? I get a little twitchy when authors seperate Sasuke and Naruto, even if it's just for a little while. But don't mind me, write your story the way you want, I just want to be informed of the pairings even the teeny tiny ones ^^

I like your story...alot. =) I can't wait to read the next chappie. ^_^

Yay!! Lemon next chapter!!! Write now! Write now! x3 You made me feel inspired!!! x3 -Huggles-

OMfG! This wil be sooooo fun to read XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD what a bitch sasuke are muaahahahahahah and I hope the lemon is about Sasuke and Naruto grrr if not muuu then I'm going to cryyyy

Not that anyone here is a bitch. ^^;;

Anyway, awesome job, this was incredibly fun to read. However, somehow, Kyuubi and Company can be, uh, overbearing at times. -__-? I don't know. It's my fault, really. (Why the hell did I read the AN?! I never read the AN!!!) I guess it starts with Narumi, though. The manipulative/obnoxious bitch thing is good, but that's not where the bad-taste factor lies. (Actually, being a bitch can pretty damn attractive.) She's just way too OC-ish. Like, if she were to appear in the cannon, I would go, "That must be a rabid, Japanese fan request. Or an extra high-hitted RP character." in my head. And Kyuubi? Uh, nothing's wrong with him, but when you put him and Narumi together... You get OOC OCs. -__-;; (I think I'm not making sense, but if you read it a few times, you'll get it.) Don't worry though, with the Naruto fandom, it's usually Naruto and Sasuke who come out like OCs, not the little explored Kyuubi and Sexy no Jutsu-ed Naruto. Really, it's a good, good fic, and I am seriously enjoying the way you depict everybody. So, don't feel bad. Your writing is awesome! ^__^b (Damn, I am starting to feel that if I read whatever I just wrote, I will have to fix it... O__O! Not happening. ^^)

So yeah, good job! And keep the updates coming! And, if you want, make Narumi less... overbearing. -__-;;

(Ch. 5)
Before I forget; are all those pairings listed really going to take part? It looks a bit like joking, or maybe some are only one-sided. I'd like that to be cleared up for me, if you could. :) Also, "Mafia/Yakuza/Gangster" XDDDD I hope you know that's all basically the same thing. XD

I liked this chapter.
For the NejiNaruto, weird grandpa Kyuubi, Tsunade and [oh god yes!] Sasuke procaliming again what's HIS! Yeah!!!


But, uh, I'd suggest getting this chapter beta-ed; it was full of spelling mistakes and typos of many sorts. Not that it was really bad or anything, just something you should consider doing at some point. :)


Until the next,
Ja ne~

i only have one thing to say... PLEASE UPDATE FASTERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!