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by twistedsheets

person mitsune
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD IIYYYAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!! WHY'D YOU STOP THERE?! DAMMIT!!!! please please please update soon it took you so long to post chp5 i hope it wont take that long to post up the next chapter ive been waiting fo this chapter for almost a month or more than a month,cant remember... please make the next chapter a lot longer ne/ cause o fthe history between them and stuff this is really a great fic i wonder how uchiha-san is going to molest naruto-sama this time? good luck and gambatte!! ^_^.
person Hitomi No Ryu
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...I would love to be that limo driver right about now. Anyway...UPDATE SOON!!
person Chibi_Lover
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait!!! I love possesive Sasuke! It's just so hot! *blush* I await the upcoming lemon! Please update soon!! For the good of your readers!
person fyredevyl
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yay! You updated!!! Another very well-written chapter, like always. Guess that comes with the whole journalist territory, right? And I don't think the story is lagging at all. You've given us a whole mixture of mystery, romance, betrayal and so much more that no chapter is left lacking. I can't wait until your next chapter is out. I'll be looking for it.
Cheers ^_^
person dark mousy
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon!!!!! i like how each chapter of yours grabs my interest and keeps it. that's one of the elments that makes a good fic for me. so update soon, please!!!! XD and poor naruto.. if one person isn't dragging him into a car, it's another, lol.
person Choi-sama
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am definetely liking this. I think Narumi was actually a bit much, but whatever. I just want to see more of that hot male action you had going on earlier. But, Sakura just really grates on my nerves in this story. Please, if you have to change something, change her. Less loud, less nosy, less all-around anal. (No half-pun intended.) Ugh, I'm sleepy. Sorry. Tell you what, I'll do a good, focused review if you write another chapter sometime this month.

Good job anyway.
person Reina
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WoW.....O_O
That's good but what will happen next ???
wahhhh I can't wait for the next chap
*put up a banner*
I want more!!!!
I want more!!!!


He he *smile*
person ^___^
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! The suspense! I love this fanfic! Thanx for the preview, cant wait until the real chapter! UPDATE SOON!
person ky0kichi
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eeeep. I really hope Sasuke isn't the bad guy in this fic..I mean..I don't mind him coming on to Naruto and trying to claim him, but if he does something evil I'm gonna be hella pissed! :PPPP

Update soon onegai!
person ghostninja85
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool preview.

Naruto's twin seems like she could be a mary sue, but then again, ALL OCs seem that way in the beginning. I have enough faith in you that that won't happen.

Post the next chapter as soon as you can! This tidbit has me hungry for more. (and I haven't seen you post in ages)