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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not at all! the twin was kind of cute in a twisted and cruel way. ^_^
look forward to the real chapter!
look forward to the real chapter!
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehe, that was so cute!! I actually really liked Narumi. I thought that there are parts of her that are completely like Naruto, and just like in real life, Naruto gets irritated about those things the msot. It's funny, because the advise she gives to naruto is probably the same advise he'd give to someone else in his position. I thought the whole dynamic was great. at first, she wa rubbing me the wrong way, like, kind of manipulative. but, in the end, i think you made her a multi-faceted character which totally made me like her more. hopefully the real chapter will come out soon!
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wicked preview, funny thing is i only found this fic last night, imagine my surprise when i opened up the link today and i noticed one chapter more than i left last night. you've caught my interest with lots of varying points and if this fic is anything like 'reflections and shadows' i know it's going to be great.
impatiently awaiting your next update
nikki
impatiently awaiting your next update
nikki
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I hope it some hot sex here 'cause I read a goddamed 63 chap story and NO sex in it T.T
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww WHY did you left it like that WHEN the fun started grrrr
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHOOOOOHOOOOOO NARUTO IN SASUKES LAP!!!!!!!!!!!! MWAA HAa hAA HAA HAA HAA HAA HAA this is going to be fun to read HAHAHAHAHHAAHA POOR NARU CHAN AND PLEASE write a lemon/smut blablabla scene I NEED IT X3 ó_ò
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dud you HAVE to keep writing. The BEST lime story plot I've seen!! OMG I really love this!! So kawaii yet funny~~
O, and I like that added twin sister character of yours, nice hanger there!! ~.^
Continue please!! =D
O, and I like that added twin sister character of yours, nice hanger there!! ~.^
Continue please!! =D
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good good good.Interesting.Whats next boss?He does not look like Michal Jackson,get your eyes checked and be original,Oro is hot little girl!
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wowza. This is getting interesting :o Update soon, I'm dying to see what happens ^^;
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yosh! an update! this ones great! is sasuke gonna kidanap naruto in this this fic? cause i have a feeling he would, please update soon cause i wanna see sasuke kun in action again*drool* ^_^.