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i really like your fic. i think it's the whole AU thing, it works. i LOVED your idea of naruto's twin. it makes so much sense! and i feel like she would be a great character to write, and it wouldn't be fair if she wasn't a real person. anyway, i think the whole group dynamic is very interesting and i'm curious to see how they develop. shikamaru and ino are really cute. i'm excited to see how iruka plays into it all, and when gaara comes into the picture. i think you're writing style is fine. it's really up to you if you want more details/description but what you're doing now works. my only comment is that you should try not to make neji such an over protective prick--not that he is right now, but i see the development in the future. i see where people get that impression, but doing that kind of keeps his character from being...complete? well-rounded? i don't know what the right word is, but it makes him seem really one-sided. sorry, neji's one of my favorite characters so i just want the best for him! keep up the good work and update soon!

Omg!! you know Momo! she was a buddy of mine on narutofan. we used to love telling every1 in the comments section about the joys of yaoi! but anyway, lovely chapter. we got to see a some of sasuke and naruto's pasts but not enough to answer all our questions. so i'm eagerly looking foward to your next update. i can't wait to hear more about naruto's twin, what role the kyuubi is play and orochimaru's proposal. so until then, keep up the good work.

loved your story, hope you update soon! keep on rocking!!! \m/

*___* nooooooo! what a cliffhanger! hehe. ooooh, i love that. turning naruto's sexy no jutsu into a real person. can't wait to see how she turns out.
once again, great chapter. :]

Ooooh, this is very interesting!
Please keep writing, and THANK YOU for proofreading!
So many good fics get messed up because of bad spelling and stuff!
Love it!
Kai

Hmm...

The plot thickens...

Keep up the awesome work. Coolsa.

HEhe, loved this so far! ^__^
And i adored the bathroom scene~
*glomps*
update!

*Gasps* Orochimaruo!!! That perv!!! D=< Naruto has a twin sister, eh? xD I wonder what part she has int eh story. oh, by the way, is this gonna be a death-fic? like..is Naruto or Sasuke gonna die?

man this is a great fic you have keep up the good work and update soon

Another great chapter! Can't wait for the next one to be posted! Keep up the great work, the story is really great!