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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice update! i loved this chapter! thanks for the encouragement too, in your reply to my review! it means a lot, you're such an amazing writer! (as far as I can tell from this fic!) I hope you get the chance to update soon!
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Geeez....This just keeps getting better and better. Please update soon!
Oh and there was a typo that I found to be really funny....when Naruto was thinking that he needed to apologize to Neji for not telling him stuff, b/c he owed him so much, the word was owned instead of owed. It made all crazy ideas pop up into my head. Naruto OWNS Neji...now that's a nice picture.
And you've done a really good job in making Orochimaru creepy in this story. I don't know why, but I got creeped out when he was smirking at Naruto...ugh...maybe it was the Michael Jackson comparison...they are VERY similar....hahahaha...it was perfect.
Ok! I'm done...
Cheers
Oh and there was a typo that I found to be really funny....when Naruto was thinking that he needed to apologize to Neji for not telling him stuff, b/c he owed him so much, the word was owned instead of owed. It made all crazy ideas pop up into my head. Naruto OWNS Neji...now that's a nice picture.
And you've done a really good job in making Orochimaru creepy in this story. I don't know why, but I got creeped out when he was smirking at Naruto...ugh...maybe it was the Michael Jackson comparison...they are VERY similar....hahahaha...it was perfect.
Ok! I'm done...
Cheers
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heh...that twin sister thing really surprised. it just totally came out of no where. this story seems to have taken a strange twist. can't wait to see what happens next. ne, is orochimaru planning to jump naruto? aww...poor naruto...
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDAAAAATTTTEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is she the kyuubi? huh? I wonder?
Don't do anything that evil to Naruto. He's too nice and stuff. If you do, I'll be very sad -_-
Hopefully we'll see some action soon, and I can't wait until we find out more about what's going on.
Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
P.S. I love KilluaGon slash. They're just a perfect match- the way I'd love Naruto and Sasuke's to be.
Don't do anything that evil to Naruto. He's too nice and stuff. If you do, I'll be very sad -_-
Hopefully we'll see some action soon, and I can't wait until we find out more about what's going on.
Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
P.S. I love KilluaGon slash. They're just a perfect match- the way I'd love Naruto and Sasuke's to be.
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have to say, when i first read the summary, i was quite intrigued. it was a different idea and had me wanting to read more. i read and i like what i've read so far. it's got a nice pace and very fluid. hehe.
i like your interpertation of the characters as well. though it's au, i can picture the way you have described most of them. especially sasuke. oooooh. he does sound mighty yummy :P
anywho, can't wait to read more and find out about akatsuki and the gang. hehe. just wondering, are you planning on bringing itachi into the picture? ;o) hehehe. good luck with your next chapter!
<3
~azamaria-chan
i like your interpertation of the characters as well. though it's au, i can picture the way you have described most of them. especially sasuke. oooooh. he does sound mighty yummy :P
anywho, can't wait to read more and find out about akatsuki and the gang. hehe. just wondering, are you planning on bringing itachi into the picture? ;o) hehehe. good luck with your next chapter!
<3
~azamaria-chan
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was sooooo good! I love the action and how Neji bursted in the room!!!! I wanna see what will happen next chapter with snake man and the red cloud mofos!!!! ^o^
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! This last chapter was great. And thank you for that link. I listened to some of the voice clips. I was really freaked out though by Orochimaru's morning call. OMG, I wouldn't want to have him whispering in my ear in the morning.
Anyway, I hope you update soon. ^_^
Anyway, I hope you update soon. ^_^
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The scariest thing in this fanfic so far, is the discription of Orochimaru looking like Micheal Jackson. LOL! I'd kinda have to agree on that! There is quite a resemblance! Keep up the good work! So far so good!
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ya know, I dont really mind those damn mtf cliffhangers...yep, I dont mind them, I JUST FUCKING HATE THEM!!!!!!...breather in, breathe out...but still, that doesnt change the fact that I absolutely love this story!!GO SASUNARU GO!!!!!!!!! XDDD