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for Bygones and Bylines

by twistedsheets

person hogo-chan
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice update! i loved this chapter! thanks for the encouragement too, in your reply to my review! it means a lot, you're such an amazing writer! (as far as I can tell from this fic!) I hope you get the chance to update soon!
person fyredevyl
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Geeez....This just keeps getting better and better. Please update soon!
Oh and there was a typo that I found to be really funny....when Naruto was thinking that he needed to apologize to Neji for not telling him stuff, b/c he owed him so much, the word was owned instead of owed. It made all crazy ideas pop up into my head. Naruto OWNS Neji...now that's a nice picture.
And you've done a really good job in making Orochimaru creepy in this story. I don't know why, but I got creeped out when he was smirking at Naruto...ugh...maybe it was the Michael Jackson comparison...they are VERY similar....hahahaha...it was perfect.
Ok! I'm done...
Cheers
person lostlily
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heh...that twin sister thing really surprised. it just totally came out of no where. this story seems to have taken a strange twist. can't wait to see what happens next. ne, is orochimaru planning to jump naruto? aww...poor naruto...
person someone
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDAAAAATTTTEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person ghostninja85
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is she the kyuubi? huh? I wonder?

Don't do anything that evil to Naruto. He's too nice and stuff. If you do, I'll be very sad -_-

Hopefully we'll see some action soon, and I can't wait until we find out more about what's going on.

Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

P.S. I love KilluaGon slash. They're just a perfect match- the way I'd love Naruto and Sasuke's to be.
person azamaria-chan
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have to say, when i first read the summary, i was quite intrigued. it was a different idea and had me wanting to read more. i read and i like what i've read so far. it's got a nice pace and very fluid. hehe.
i like your interpertation of the characters as well. though it's au, i can picture the way you have described most of them. especially sasuke. oooooh. he does sound mighty yummy :P
anywho, can't wait to read more and find out about akatsuki and the gang. hehe. just wondering, are you planning on bringing itachi into the picture? ;o) hehehe. good luck with your next chapter!
<3
~azamaria-chan
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was sooooo good! I love the action and how Neji bursted in the room!!!! I wanna see what will happen next chapter with snake man and the red cloud mofos!!!! ^o^
person fyredevyl
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! This last chapter was great. And thank you for that link. I listened to some of the voice clips. I was really freaked out though by Orochimaru's morning call. OMG, I wouldn't want to have him whispering in my ear in the morning.

Anyway, I hope you update soon. ^_^
person AleGnA
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The scariest thing in this fanfic so far, is the discription of Orochimaru looking like Micheal Jackson. LOL! I'd kinda have to agree on that! There is quite a resemblance! Keep up the good work! So far so good!
person Liliath
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ya know, I dont really mind those damn mtf cliffhangers...yep, I dont mind them, I JUST FUCKING HATE THEM!!!!!!...breather in, breathe out...but still, that doesnt change the fact that I absolutely love this story!!GO SASUNARU GO!!!!!!!!! XDDD