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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Anou..if you were only playing around,
Ok, but uhm..Its Kishomoto
And, wahh gomen ne, demo,
This fic should be taken down e.e;;
No offence but wtf..AIDS..?
And this story is totaly out of line
I dont mean to be a flamer but
someone really needs to tell you so
you dont keep making a fool of yourselff.
I've never written a bad comment about any
fic @_@;; But hontou ni, it needs to be kinda
fixed..more than just a little. Thats like disgracing
Sasuke -.-
Ok, but uhm..Its Kishomoto
And, wahh gomen ne, demo,
This fic should be taken down e.e;;
No offence but wtf..AIDS..?
And this story is totaly out of line
I dont mean to be a flamer but
someone really needs to tell you so
you dont keep making a fool of yourselff.
I've never written a bad comment about any
fic @_@;; But hontou ni, it needs to be kinda
fixed..more than just a little. Thats like disgracing
Sasuke -.-
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The guy's name is Kisame, and I like the fic,but really no such thing as consented rape. Could proofread more, too.
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is soooo sad, I hope that Sasuke bastard dies, and maybe you can have Neji come in the story and have him make Naruto better and love him. That would be so much better then what you have now, because it's so depressing. Anyway keep up the good work, and please please please add Neji to the story. I think he and Naruto make a cute couple
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, the shark friend is calld kisame, and plz, plz dont do ani itachi\sasuke (mabe rape in a flashback) but nothing else!! i hate multy pairing...-_-.....are thay going to day from aids? 0.0?....sorry for the speling
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is Kisame, no? Why is sasuke such a prick in this one, huh?
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah.mm..wha.omg! wtf!?...>.<..*dies*
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read your story again and I cried, 6___6
Hope it's gets happier if not it's o.k. after all it's your story ^_______~
I never thanked you for the cookie so thanks!
But my "NIGHTLY ROOMATE" Kakashi wants one too. @__@'
HAHA he's such a pain but quite the fucker,... ^U^'
Your loyal friend -Billy
Hope it's gets happier if not it's o.k. after all it's your story ^_______~
I never thanked you for the cookie so thanks!
But my "NIGHTLY ROOMATE" Kakashi wants one too. @__@'
HAHA he's such a pain but quite the fucker,... ^U^'
Your loyal friend -Billy
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay another chappie!! *hug* thanks for the cookie!!
but i hope they will get along after some time...*sniff* still i love the story!
but i hope they will get along after some time...*sniff* still i love the story!
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read your story and I still LOVE IT!!!!!
It's so sad ... something unusual.
The name is fine. REALLY!
I thought it would not end up like this thats all.
AND NO MATTER WHAT REMEMBER THIS
FLAMES ARE FLAMES NOT REVIEWS!!!!
FUCK those who see it otherwise!
ever loyal perverted freak of nature -Billy
It's so sad ... something unusual.
The name is fine. REALLY!
I thought it would not end up like this thats all.
AND NO MATTER WHAT REMEMBER THIS
FLAMES ARE FLAMES NOT REVIEWS!!!!
FUCK those who see it otherwise!
ever loyal perverted freak of nature -Billy
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
as ussual ur writting is so GoOd...but i really did hope you change the aids part not co'z i don't like it...it's ur story play with them...wait that didn't sound right...anyway it's how you executed it. it turns people off from the story...if you can write this good i know you can write it in a more creative way..rather than shouting it to the world. i like the aids issue it does happen and people shouldn't ignore it. it's reallity at it does exist.lol. that was what i meant o.O V(peace)