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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Receive my AIDS?...Receive my AIDS...I really can't seem to get over that line. It was so ...random. No matter what you wrote, it would have been acceptable but "Recieve my AIDS"?...Man...I need therapy... Anyway, keep doing what you're doing, b/c its kool but no more AIDS giving or receiving, k? Because that was really weird. Peace Out.
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, if it's consented, then it ain't rape. Idiot.
And bloody hell, use grammar. If you call yourself a friggin' author, dun use l33t sp34k. U look lik a |=r34king idiot.
And bloody hell, use grammar. If you call yourself a friggin' author, dun use l33t sp34k. U look lik a |=r34king idiot.
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh....My...God....
Uh, I think that last line kinda ruined it... .___0;; But, it was pretty well written...The grammer was fine, the spelling was fine...
Er, yes....I still think that last line...>.<;;;
Uh, I think that last line kinda ruined it... .___0;; But, it was pretty well written...The grammer was fine, the spelling was fine...
Er, yes....I still think that last line...>.<;;;
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
#Blinks#
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"RECEIVE MY AIDS!" wtf?!?!
nyahahaha as soon as i read that last line i was laughing so hard it scared me
oh well that was goddamn funny. freakishly so ^_^ hahahaha
nyahahaha as soon as i read that last line i was laughing so hard it scared me
oh well that was goddamn funny. freakishly so ^_^ hahahaha
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
moronic,get a clue ya ditz
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why so many people are giving you a bad time for this stories ending..... O.O;; I liked it and I can toatally see Itatchi raping Sasuke and giving him Aids. I mean, the disease does exist and it does happen this way in the real world. If you want some supportive addvice on your writing in the future or for the continuation of this story, all you have to do is ask. ^_^
-Zaku
-Zaku
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so FUCKING HOT!!!!!!!
I love this shit.
You have got to write more on this one.
The title doesn't match the story though... OH WELL!!! ^_~
I love this shit.
You have got to write more on this one.
The title doesn't match the story though... OH WELL!!! ^_~
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
communist whore? hahaha, that's gotta be the wierdest insult possible for that momen! i never knew sasuke was so passionate about commies. the ending really wasn't so much horrifying as cheesy. honestly this fic was fuckin hilarious in the way 'chucky' movies are.
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Recieve my aids?!" ?!?! Don't you think that was a little uncalled for. If you didn't end the story with that particualr sentence, it would have turned out as a good fanfic. Too bad...