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August 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this story! I can't wait to see how everything turns out. This grabbed my interest so strongly that I read all 15 chapters in one sitting.
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January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OK.... ready for more please?
Really wonderful story... I just hope that Naruto wakes up before he royally screws up everything with Neji. (Hey a girl can dream right?)
I really look forward to the next part.
Ja Ne,
FairyNiamh
Really wonderful story... I just hope that Naruto wakes up before he royally screws up everything with Neji. (Hey a girl can dream right?)
I really look forward to the next part.
Ja Ne,
FairyNiamh
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December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
okay so at first I was like "oh yeah everyone is in love with crybaby naruto" and thought he was going to be a MaryJane Character so I started to get turned off by the whole Neji loves him Sasuke loves him Gaara loves him thing, and Haku and Shika are so overprotective it just seemed to OOC for me, but then I really started getting into the darker side of the fic, and I started to like it a bit more when you actually brought dark Sasuke into the picture.
I hope that you develop the Itachi/Sasuke side of the story and help them work out their guilt issues....that is a very interesting side of this fic. Is Itachi trying to protect Sasuke or hurt him, did he have a roll in getting Naruto kicked out of his apartment? Is he trying to keep Naruto and Sasuke apart to hurt Sasuke, because the boy goes a bit ballistic when he doesn't get his Naru fix, and now that Naru is living with Neji Sasuke is going to blow his fuse....maybe...who knows this is just great stuff....
I hope that Sasuke and Naruto end up together in my HO he is a better match than Neji or Gaara for Naruto. They both have suffered tremendous loss and they both kind of need each other they are like a true jin and jang connection. Naruto's light to Sasuke's dark....I hope you keep updating this fic, because it really is getting so intersting and I can't wait for Sasuke and Naruto to actually have time to get together with out interruptions and with out Naruto going all nurotic when Sasuke tells him how he feels.
Anyway enough of my "assumptions"....hope you have fun writing the rest of this story, because I know I'll have fun reading it even if you go a totally different direction with it and end up having Sasuke be a freaky killer..LOL
I hope that you develop the Itachi/Sasuke side of the story and help them work out their guilt issues....that is a very interesting side of this fic. Is Itachi trying to protect Sasuke or hurt him, did he have a roll in getting Naruto kicked out of his apartment? Is he trying to keep Naruto and Sasuke apart to hurt Sasuke, because the boy goes a bit ballistic when he doesn't get his Naru fix, and now that Naru is living with Neji Sasuke is going to blow his fuse....maybe...who knows this is just great stuff....
I hope that Sasuke and Naruto end up together in my HO he is a better match than Neji or Gaara for Naruto. They both have suffered tremendous loss and they both kind of need each other they are like a true jin and jang connection. Naruto's light to Sasuke's dark....I hope you keep updating this fic, because it really is getting so intersting and I can't wait for Sasuke and Naruto to actually have time to get together with out interruptions and with out Naruto going all nurotic when Sasuke tells him how he feels.
Anyway enough of my "assumptions"....hope you have fun writing the rest of this story, because I know I'll have fun reading it even if you go a totally different direction with it and end up having Sasuke be a freaky killer..LOL
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December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh sorry in my review above I meant MarySue not MarryJane....all the Marry's are such Diva's...
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December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Sasuke is insane in the mid-brain. And Naruto keeps coming back for more abuse. I guess you can't blame the victim. More insight to Naruto's abuse as a child would really explain Naruto's want/need to explain Sasuke's emotional state of mind. ~Looking forward towards Neji's solution towards the "Sasuke" issue.
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December 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story! I cannot wait for the next chapters. All of your characters are very complex but exciting.
Keep going!
Keep going!
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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
do you plan on continuing this story at all. I like it very much
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay so i read this on ff and decided I love the story. But I just can't stop hoping Naruto and Gaara get together in the end. I hope Sasuke gets assasinated!
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July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing, i absolulty cannot wait for more, please update soon.