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i really luv you, ya know? so, now, update. Shoo...Go go, hurry up.

awesome! awesome! awesome!!! more more more!! =P i love how you do naruto in first person, but still make it seem so believable. great job, cant wait to see more!

I find your fic absolutely adorable, and if I weren't such a lazy ass, I would've said it long ago (as it is, yours is the first fic I'm reviewing here, yay). It really stands out, I was hooked since the first chapter: good plot, amazing characterisations and sense of humour, and long chapters to boot. But! Is it too much to ask you if not to beta then just to spellcheck it? Sometimes trudging through mistakes ruins the mood, seriously. Pretty please?

HOLY SHIT WOW AMAZING GREAT ETC. now al u have to do is UPDATE NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW DAMMIT

I seriously hope that Naruto does not end up with Sasuke... Sasuke doesn't make Naruto feel safe at all and the way Naruto acts with Sasuke is a prey to a very large predator (snake comes to mind)... sowwie about the outburst... just had to get it off my chest.... anyways, thank you for updating... the chapter was very enjoyable as usual and i will await your next chapter as patiently as possible... =)

You updated! I'm so happy I could just squeeze you until you popped! Well...maybe not. If I did that, then the story would never continue. I really do love your story. The way you write makes everything seem so REAL. I can picture everything perfectly in my mind. Candies to you for being so awesome. I can't wait for the next update. :)

Heh heh. That was really sweet of Neji. And except for one time, Naruto didn't think of Sasuke at all. :p That was the best part. i will be waiting for the
update on saturday.

Yay!!! You updated!!! *glomps* Go you!!! ^___^ I absolutely loved this chapter -- very sweet! I can't wait for the next chapter, and I'm gonna' hold you to your promise of the Saturday deadline, I can assure you!!! ^___~ Keep up the good work!!!

OH MY GOD 8O. . .your fic is just *so* indescribably good. correction, i meant AMAZING. for one, you don't seem to americanize everything too much. your details about where the characters live are just perfect, not too poor and run-down for naruto and not too rich for sasuke (SO many people make sasuke live in a gigantic mansion and crap like that, it's not even funny). your itachi in here is very nicely written too, preserving the mysterious sense while mirroring the uchiha massacre well. plus, your fic is nejixnaru to boot :D~ the short conversation between itachi and naruto in itachi's room is nice, although i'm not sure why you placed it there. i am definitely anticipating your update XD! PLEASE PLEASE please continue X3!!! *bows*

this reminds me of the Mars manga...