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for Purple Cocaine Prison

by Ebraheart

person Toki Mirage()
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful idea! Loving every bit of it!!! I hope you update soon, because i like the way you portrayed them so well in a real-life kinda setting. ^^ UPDATE SOON!!!!
person foamy
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just love the way you write...It's kinda scary really cause what you wrote about love is exactly how I see it....haha..^^....I hope you'll continue soon!
Except for a few grammar mistakes it's really good....btw his name is Neji not Neiji...many makes that mistake...I'd really like to talk to you someday...on MSN or something...well..continue soon!

Hugs foamy
person Tsuku
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
1) this fic made me figure something out: Sasunaru is the official sponsor of my heart
2) I think it would have been cooler if Zabuza was a grown man, not a classmate, but that's just a biased opinion since... you see... heh, I'm a pervie that enjoys shota-like relationships.
3) uhm... I think I forgot this point o.o
4) I love how you portrait Haku, even if he appeared too little in the manga I can perfectly see him doing the stuff you describe here
5) If you ever need help with spanish stuff you can ask me =D I'm a native spanish speaker =D =D
6) I'm liking this AU thingy, I hope the next chapter is out soon n_n


note: it's weird I leave reviews, but I fel like encouraging you n_n
keep on the writing!!!

and yeah, I guess NejiNaru is the OTP for this fic, but I'm feeling fangirly, so: go Sasunaru!
person jess
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i m liking your story so much!
your way of writing definitely drew me on! It's really an appealing style to me!!
the tension... everything so well written
pls update soooooon! cant wait
person DarkSeductress
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is really getting interesting. I think Itachi is a bit funny. The why Naruto describes him as being a panther (prowling and stuff...). And I can't wait to see what's going to happen if Neji finds out lol. World War 3, maybe? lol lol And I'm guessing Gaara is going to keep a small role and keep out of the equation. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
person MultifacetedTune
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! You updated!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! ^^ *gives you a box of chocolates, a pen, and some paper* There: everything you need to be creative!!! ^___~ ...now then, go write more!!! Thanks again!!!
person Monmon
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, another great chapter.... =).... anyways, I love your Neji and I think he's perfect for Naruto but when I think of Sasuke, I can't help but feel sorry for him... Sasuke is such a selfish bastard but he has a certain quality in him that makes you want to forgive him even though he doesn't deserve it... anyways, i'm always happy to see a new chapter... keep up the great work! =Þ
person mixmilly
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I dont know what to say, I've never reveiwed before.
I honestly love the way you write. This story entertains me so much. I'm enjoying the twists and turns with the relationships too much!
I anticipate your next chapter with great enthusiasm, please continue to bless us with your writing.
person Snnell
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whee~ i like ur style of writing.. all in POVs. really interesting. ^^ can't wait to see what happens when neji does find out that sasuke has been hitting on naruto!
person coriander
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was a bit warry of the tittle, but finally decided to read it. I must say I'm kinda glad I did. I love/hate the way you don't really say who Naruto's going to end up with. And Although I love narusasu, I love neji in this story... well i love Neji in general. I hope they get together. Or at least get to mess around a bit. what the hell, have Naruto be a slut and get together with Gaara too lol.