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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter yet again! i really love your writing! next chapter is going to be nejixnaru but is the pairing definate for the entire fic? I almost want it to be a sasuxnaru fic the way everything is turning out! but, it is your choice! I love your story any way!
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh!! Update soon. I hope there is some SasuNaru too!
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! OMG, this fic rocks!!! Very kewl idea, and well done, too....... ^___~ I love it!!! I look forward to finding out where you take this and who ends up with whom in the end. Keep up the good work, and update ASAP, k? Ja ne!!!
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I mean I really, really love this story. Your characterizations are amazing, and so intriguing. I also love the relationships between the characters, and I'm especially intrigued by this potential love triangle. I must admit that I am just as fascinated by Sasuske and Naruto's relationship as I am by Neiji's and Naruto's. I hope you explore both relationships equally, instead of just focusing predominantly on Neiji and Naruto. I am very much looking forward to your upcoming chapters, and let me just say that it is so refreshing to finally find someone capable of character developement! Bravo!
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved Chappie 3! Good stuff! Update soon!
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i commend you for being able to write such an interesting chapter, one that makes me wanting more. the story is moving along nicely, and the dialogue is good. for some reason, i'm feeling that this fic cold go in so many different directions, as far as the pairing goes. i think that neji, sasuke and gaara all have a shot at getting naruto so far, and i honestly can't say for sure.
this tird chapter also brings up questions about what exactly happened between naruto and sasuke in the past, and maybe the issue isn't as simple as naruto thinks. oh the possibility to that! *fangirls*
well, i have to say that this chap is well written, and i look forward to more.
this tird chapter also brings up questions about what exactly happened between naruto and sasuke in the past, and maybe the issue isn't as simple as naruto thinks. oh the possibility to that! *fangirls*
well, i have to say that this chap is well written, and i look forward to more.
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! Jealous Sasuke, date with Neji on Wednesday! Maybe now would not be too great a time to bring up a poss suggestion for NaruGaara?
Loved this chapter! You rule at this high school stuff, the lessons are interesting because of interactions. It's funny, very hilarious actually-love the metphoring and the rest of it.
Can't wait for the fourth chapter update. Please make it super soon!!
Loved this chapter! You rule at this high school stuff, the lessons are interesting because of interactions. It's funny, very hilarious actually-love the metphoring and the rest of it.
Can't wait for the fourth chapter update. Please make it super soon!!
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooOOOOOo Sasuke's sooo jealous >o< XDDDD ...<3 I love this story, keep up the good work and I hope to see an update soon! :D It has a really interesting plot.. can't wait to see what happens "tomorrow" and "wednesday" XD
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo!! Another great chapter! I love how you wrote this. It's the best! ^^ Teeheehee. Write more soon okay? I'd read it right away!
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your story. it's really awesome. i can't wait to read the next chappie. good luck writing it out. ganbatte!