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well, i m reaally really liking this!
the interaction between neji n naruto is reaally good!
please continue soon~!

wow. that was extremely good. love the story name btw, very cool. i love naruto's personality. it's very different from what one usually expects from him and your writing skills are pretty good as well. i am very much looking foward to an update to this and hopefully when you do the chapter will be just as long. and just to be sure, you WILL be making this a NejiNaru, right? there are just not enough NejiNaru fics out there. i mean, come on! It's Neji with Naruto! how the hell could you resist that? (sorry for rambling) ^___^

this is really cool, i'm really liking this story. normally i don't get into first person POV stories but this story is great. i like how you've made naruto an artist, and i love the way you've described the characters. i hope that there will be some naru neji action later on, they seem to be made for each other in this story, anyway it's really good and i hope there are more chapters on the way cause i'd like to see what happens next.

hm...this fic is very...how may I say...different I guess. And in a good way! The sarcasm is funny and I like the way you wrote in Naruto's view. Everything is so believable without spiralling out of control. May I specially compliment you in the journal-like style you write in, it really makes things much more interesting. Keep up the great job and update soon!

wow! your writing is amazing! there have been a lot of really good new fics posted in the last couple of days but yours is my favorite! and the chapter was so long i love it! naruto seemed kinda ooc but it was a good thing. It really made him seem more... down to earth or something like that. It showed him to have real feelings and that he wasn't just an airhead. and what was that whole thing about when Neji grabbed his arm to write his # down? wah! I'm gonna go crazy from suspense! *starts foaming at the mouth* sorry, i just got a little excited! Please update super fast! I love your fic so much!

i must say that i love au stories where the characters are set in present day school situations. the way you are portraying the characters is amazing. i look forward to reading the rest of this story.

umm... about the part where naruto and lee are jumping for the ball.. well.. the center isn't allowed to grab the ball. he's only allowed to slap it away. eheh, i used to play basketball for my school so yea, not allowed. ^_^

i'm a sasunaru shipper so i thought i'd give it this pairing a try, it's nice but.. neji needs more character development IMHO.

this kicks ass
hope you update soon
make sure all your other chaps are just as long

The only reason i read this story first was the title best title ever.

I understand your tense problem-I have the same problem. I think this is a good way to open a story-though I can't say much about your Sasuke because I like him(yes I know he betrays people and all that, still like him though) but never-the-less it was a great chapter. I think it'll hook people onto your story and if offers a bunch of different paths for the story to take. I hope you get good feedback because I didn't see much wrong at all with this chapter-maybe one or two spelling mistakes but nothing to get worked up over. Goodluck and I hope you update soon!