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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was amazing! update soon plz.
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well written, I'm impressed. I'm assuming this is going to predominantly Neji/Naru but you've definitely let the winddow open for some Sasu/Naru and maybe even Gaara/Naru if you wanted to take it down that road. I particularly like the definition of each day. LMAO. Good stuff. Can't wait to read more, so please UPDATE SOON!
P.S. Why the title "Purple Cocaine Prison"? Just wondering...
P.S. Why the title "Purple Cocaine Prison"? Just wondering...
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute! ^^ So is this a NejiNaru fic, then? That's what it seems like. Will there be any SasuNaru? At first, it seemed like it would be, then it seemed to take an entirely different direction when Neji and Naruto started spending time together. (I hope to see at least some SasuNaru, since they're my favourite pairing...) Anyway, continue soon? I'm really enjoying this story so far, and I look forward to reading more!
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is quite an intriguing chapter. the atmosphere is pretty dark, and the portrayal of sasuke as the antagonist is pretty cool. i also like how naruto is a mixture of the anime/manga and also unique to your fic; he's believable as an ordinary teenager. so far the story doesn't feel forced or OTT, although the scenes with neji towards the end is a tad too fluffy... but i enjoyed it nonetheless. keep up the good work, i am interested in how you develop the story for later chapters.
cheers
p/s: since you did mention gaara in this chapter, i'm very much anticipating more of him in the future, as well as shikamaru and haku.
cheers
p/s: since you did mention gaara in this chapter, i'm very much anticipating more of him in the future, as well as shikamaru and haku.
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!Finally some Naruto/Neji yaoi fiction!
And it seems like Sasuke's a little comfy with Naruto tooO_o;*drools when thinking of Naruto/Neji/Sasuke ness* Good god..YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!Pleaseplease..
Wonderful story. And the chapters longer than in most fictions, you must be pretty dedicated^^
And it seems like Sasuke's a little comfy with Naruto tooO_o;*drools when thinking of Naruto/Neji/Sasuke ness* Good god..YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!Pleaseplease..
Wonderful story. And the chapters longer than in most fictions, you must be pretty dedicated^^
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really nice! Well written, and quite catching. I do hope you continue.
Also, I like how you portrayed Neji and Sasuke...And Naruto as an artist. I can see him like that too. *hands you a dounut*
Also, I like how you portrayed Neji and Sasuke...And Naruto as an artist. I can see him like that too. *hands you a dounut*
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Watch out Sasuke, your acting like a kid with a crush!
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was sooooooooooooooo good! I love the way that Naruto's life is about average yet annoying as hell! I love drawing and I love this story! When I find out how to fav stpries here, I'm so going to fav yours! ^o^