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for Purple Cocaine Prison

by Ebraheart

person Elk
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well ctreated chapter, as usual! ^^ WIsh I could've signed in, but I'm afraid I don't have enough time.

Love this chapter to death, you've placed so much drama and tension into it, I've waited patiently for you to update! I was surprised though to see Neji still wearing the necklace Naruto gave him. Does it mean he still longs for Naruto and wants to be back with him again? As for Gaara and Sasuke, what happened to the both of them when Naruto left them alone? You never cease to fill my head with questions, although you answered a few.

Wonderful plot, I definitely liked the part where Shikamaru and Naruto were sort of commenting about Haku's idea in the beginning. Nonetheless, I bet the next chapter will be just a great as this one. Until then!

-Elk

p.s- please email me once when you've updated, its bombay_229@hotmail.com
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that is such a wicked place to end the chapter! gah!

love the charged atmosphere of the whole chapter, and i'm rather surprised at how things turned up. the most unexpected thing was the confrontation between neji and sasuke. i didn't doubt that sooner or later they'll do it, just didn't expect it to be at that perticular time. it's brilliant though; shows that you could still surprise us readers like that!

itachi showing up at the end was another surprise, and i can't help but feel that he's gonna play a bigger role soon.

keep up the good work, and i can't wait for the next installment to be out!
person coriander
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you're going to update soon, because I don't know how long I can wait for the next chapter. I need to know what's going on between Naruto and Neji, and Sasuke and Gaara... yeah lol. That was an AWESOME chapter.
person kiru
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey omg please please pleasse pleass........................update i cant wait it soooooooooooooo goooooood please update soon i want to find out is niji and naruto going to be toghether again...^-^
person Tinzuli
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! New chappie! Good thing i noticed this..Good that you don't change the previous chapters, i've liked them just as they are..Thanks to you I have even been considering of maybe reading more of NarutoxNeji.. ^___^
I was worried that Naruto wouldn't tell Neji the truth and then Sasuke mutters it out and it would be even worse! O_O but now, Neji can forgive him <3 *sigh* i love Naruto and Neji together but at the same time i'm hoping that he would get together with Sasuke... I Really want to know where this fic is going to so..I keep reading ;P And you keep updating!
person Courtney
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU?!?! Did you die or something o_o????

where's the update XO
person Ashvolt
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that you decided to update again! I loved your story, and was disappointed when you stopped updating. (That said, I understand your reasons. Sometimes you just need to step back, wait a little, and see if you can continue a story after it's gone off course.) Please keep updating, and I'll happily continue reading! I love your portrayals of all the characters - the main ones in particular (Naruto, Neji, Sasuke & Gaara), and that you're not dragging on the whole Naruto/Neji/Sasuke/Gaara triangle (rectangle?) and are working towards a resolution.
person Trekiael
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh*. So it is how it is, hum? Naruto really do love Neji, he'll forgive him eventually and they'll be happey together while Gaara and Sasuke will come together cause Gaara is only like a brother and Sasuke is using him. *sigh*, well, I can't say I'm very happy with that. But it was to be expect, after all, Naruto has a thing for Neji since the beginning of this story. For me, Naruto belong to Sasuke and Gaara to Neji, but you don't agree with me obviously, at least I think, you could always change that and prove me wrong, that you didn't intend of finishing things like how I think they will, but I don't think so. I'm not flaming! Just a little sad. But your story is still great, your chapters are well done, it's intelligent, with a lot of good reflexions that make it real. I love how honnest and Naruto you make Naruto be, he's well in character. And for it, I'll continue to read, even if I know I'll be disapointed in the end, well, maybe cause there is always a little hope somewhere in me too. Anyway, good luck! Ja ne!
person Neko-chan
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow..................Neiji was rather cold with naruto....hm. He didn't seem that kind of guy, but whatever. Naru-kun might have explained something wrong or that whole Sasuke vs. Neiji thing goes waaaaaaaaaaaayyyyy deeper than i first percieved from the story. YAY! xD Gaara is turning Naru-kun punk! And the whole "shock value" attitude reminds me of myself a bit, although i wouldn't go to such lengths.only because my mom would freak and might kick me out of the house but ANYWAYS.......lol the whole tounge piercing is cool, it's supposed to help give a little "pleasure/pain" feeling in a kiss too.;) a friend of mine with one told me that. lol and her boyfriend gave her a kiss then most likely to demonstrate. xD i like your store name "baby spider" sounds so cool. and of course everyone loves a gaara cloned naru-kun in make up and sexy clothes. GO GAARA STYLE! xD lol if you haven't noticed they ish my 2 fav. char.s lol keep up the good work...i hope things with neiji work out. bye! *cuddles gaara&naruto plushies*
person tsusami
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay~ I'm really happy you didn't give up on this story. And I like the new turn so far :) Ganbatte!