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Whaaaaat? I happen to adore this story and I love how Naruto's getting all the love, that's the kind of thing that makes Naruto yaoi great xD Also, I don't think any of the characters are too OOC, besides, it's your damn story, do what you want with it. So one reader isn't impressed, by the amount of reviews you have, I'd say that the rest like how things are turning out. Don't be too bummed by one individuals opinion. I am so excited for how things are going, and it would be hilarious and hot if it turned out to be a big threesome, but alas, this isn't my story at all, it's yours! So, keep doing what your doing!!

I don't know where you read that review (and I'm to damn lazy to go search), but don't let that dude get to ya. I love the way the characters are shaped. Sasuke is still a prick *wink*, Itachi is scary (gorgeous but scary), Gaara is my favourite and I love his clothingstyle.
If you had to shape this fic into character, there would be a whole lot of kunai and sand flying around right now. I simply adore the fact that Naruto draws... so do I and one part of the story (if I can remember correctly something about not wanting to go to drawingschool, because it... it had something to do with not getting to draw your own style, but the one the school teaches you) really spoke to me.
So heck, don't believe everything reviewers say. It's your story, you write it. Please continue this story. ^^V

Hmm, I dont think theres anything wrong with your characterizations.
I like how you put your own turn on them, you're not just working
with them woodenly, instead your giving them life and flavor and
they arent really falling that far out of character. I personally
find your style rather refreshing and I like where you are going with
this story. It saddens me that your going to alter it and their
characterizations.

what! I like Naruto like this.All these "pile of squirming puppies" bishonnen,its sohot /cute/hot.Sighs.Real life happens like this too,the minute you make a commitment its like you give off phermones that bring out all those hotties that were no where when you where free.Thats my experiance.

I read the reveiw that made you change your mind and she is sooo wrong.Straight boys flirt like mad and kiss around,what tight ass planet is she from?That is no where near flaming shit,talk about something you have a clue about girl!He is not acting female he is acting like a teenager.Jealous much?Just unbeleivably ignorant not to meantion truly homophobic.Beauty is beauty,ever been friends or gone out with a beautiful guy?I think not with that bizzare attitude.Please reconsider taking advice that ignorant.Gack.Yick.You have a great vibe going don't kill its spirit cause someone doesn't get out much!!!!!!

I started off liking this fic. It was an interesting way to reprensent the characters, but i think you're losing them. with each chapter, Naruto is increasinly a 16 year old girl. Seriously. He lacks all of the things that make him lovable like his cluelessness, his loud mouthed, incorrigible behavior and his unwillingness to back down. Naruto isn't a diplomat, and really quite the opposite. Also, the way you have him flirt with everyone is the way a girl flirts with guys. Unless you want Naruto to have the appearance of a flamingly gay boy. You're giving him purely feminine qualities in both the way he speaks, and interacts. The story is cute, but it's like you're written an entirely different character and given him the name "naruto" It's so OOC that it's painful ;___; Take a look at your first chapter. He wasn't nearly this feminine in the beginning.

I personnaly love your story. You've got a good writing. I particulary love your descritption, how the first person pov is not heavy, or stupid, but well done; and how this whole thing tend to develope itself. But, yeah, we haven't see Naruto draw in a few chapter, and it's a little sad. I don't know who the final pairing will be, but I vote for SasuNaru. I really like some GaaraNaru and NejiNaru, but I think it's a little too easy (especially the NejiNaru part in your story) I prefer see Naruto and Gaara's relationship in a brotherly sort of way and my second fav pairing is Gaara and Neji (I don't care in wich way as they are both cold sort of guy). But it's not my story and not my place to decide. So, well, whatever you choose, it'll still be a good story (exept if you make them die!) So, yeah, continue and good luck! *give you a Naru-chan plushy luky charm with a little ,otbock in one hand and a brush and a pen in the other* ja ne!

I really love this story, it's one of my favorite, I really look forward to readfing more of it, I wish I could write this good.

I didn't mean to bum you out ;___; But I think you have a lot of potential and just got . . sidetracked? It's hard to keep track of a story too if you spread it out over a long period of time. Maybe get a beta reader?

Omg o-o Seriously, there is NOTHING wrong with your fic...Its progressing wonderfully and I think if you rewrote any of the previous chapters it wouldn't have NEARLY as much action and progression as the originals. Don't let other people tell you that your fic has gone full circle!! You write it and the plot works itself out in YOUR mind, not theirs. Seriously, I love this fic the way it is and I believe it would be really disappointing if it were edited...But then again..Im contradicting myself because it is your fic. I suppose its your choice, but just know that I think this story ROCKS and you shouldn't have to change it at all, trust me. Im sure a lot of others feel the same way ^^ *hugs* Alright then, I guess I'll just wait for your next update:XD