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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!!!!..... you dont have to take some crap from a reviewer. A person that reviews gives there own idea of a fic just because they dont like something dosnt mean anything. I myself hate sasuke and most likly will forever (in anime,manga,drawing,dolls,fanfics and so on ) but thats my opion other people seem to love the guy.(chill goes up back) A FANFIC IS ALWAYS OOC out of character the fact that its in another world shows that not only that put in this new world they most likly had new exprences and met new people so the fact is the fact is the person was talking BS.
PS.....i hope it wasnt one of my reviews >.
PS.....i hope it wasnt one of my reviews >.
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have no idea how to start this out. I kind of want to go, 'holy fscking hell your fic rocks hard,' but I don't think it'd do it justice. I love your take on the characters. I love their view points & catchy little come backs/quotes. As soon as I read the first chapter, I couldn't stop reading. You got me hook, line & sinker. I've honestly reread this fic more than 20 times & haven't gotten tired of it.
I mean, there's always the chance that people can dive down to making everyone OOC when writing an AU fic, but you make it work. Their personalities don't seem off or anything. It's as if that's how they are & should be in the world you wrote them into. Even though there are some misspellings & off grammar, it doesn't affect the story in the slightest. I see it and move on, not caring, because I'm just digging where things are going, how people are reacting & speaking.
BTW, I love the clothes they wear [especially Gaara's]. Your fic has this charm to it that I can't pinpoint or find, it's just there & it has me adding this to favorites & checking everyday to re-read. Also, most of the time I hate how Sasuke's characterized because a lot of people tend to stick him into the, 'i'm a prick who says 'usuratonkachi' or 'dobe' a lot,' without really expanding on his inner workings. But in your fic he's just awesome. He's a prick, but he's just- I can't explain it. He's just understandable in his prick-ish ways. & the relationship between him & Itachi? GOLDEN.
Um, wow, I think I just rambled a lot in this review. But I can't wait till you come back from re-arranging. <- is totally rooting & cheering you on.
I mean, there's always the chance that people can dive down to making everyone OOC when writing an AU fic, but you make it work. Their personalities don't seem off or anything. It's as if that's how they are & should be in the world you wrote them into. Even though there are some misspellings & off grammar, it doesn't affect the story in the slightest. I see it and move on, not caring, because I'm just digging where things are going, how people are reacting & speaking.
BTW, I love the clothes they wear [especially Gaara's]. Your fic has this charm to it that I can't pinpoint or find, it's just there & it has me adding this to favorites & checking everyday to re-read. Also, most of the time I hate how Sasuke's characterized because a lot of people tend to stick him into the, 'i'm a prick who says 'usuratonkachi' or 'dobe' a lot,' without really expanding on his inner workings. But in your fic he's just awesome. He's a prick, but he's just- I can't explain it. He's just understandable in his prick-ish ways. & the relationship between him & Itachi? GOLDEN.
Um, wow, I think I just rambled a lot in this review. But I can't wait till you come back from re-arranging. <- is totally rooting & cheering you on.
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'ts a good story in of itself, like a novel i'd pick off the shelf, but if your point is to acuretly depict the characters from naruto you're probably right in thinking that everyone is OOC
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ne is loving this fic! I love Garaa's make up and Naruto's art thing and all that. There so cool. I love the Zabuza, Haku in the story as well. I'm awaiting your next chapter on the edge of my plastic lawn chair seat.
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was reading some of your reveiws, so I want to say a few things all of a sudden.
1) I am gung-ho Sasuke/Naruto. Hehe.
2) I am pro-lemon. Eh heh heh... (evil, maniac laughter)
3) I want Itachi to do something weird again. (Ahh. Plot bunnies.)
4) I'm glad you stopped using Japanese dialouge for Boston people.
5) "Aniki" = Sasuke and Itachi = Japanese?
1) I am gung-ho Sasuke/Naruto. Hehe.
2) I am pro-lemon. Eh heh heh... (evil, maniac laughter)
3) I want Itachi to do something weird again. (Ahh. Plot bunnies.)
4) I'm glad you stopped using Japanese dialouge for Boston people.
5) "Aniki" = Sasuke and Itachi = Japanese?
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An update, FINALLY!!!!!!!
And a great one, too :)
To unswer your question: I have no idea either, but I'm a HUGE SasuNaru lover, and just a tiny bit less huge GaaNaru lover, so... Poor Naruto :)
But Gaara is so absolutely wonderful in your fic that I would'n mind him winning this competition :)
Just update sooner than last time, pleeeease!
And a great one, too :)
To unswer your question: I have no idea either, but I'm a HUGE SasuNaru lover, and just a tiny bit less huge GaaNaru lover, so... Poor Naruto :)
But Gaara is so absolutely wonderful in your fic that I would'n mind him winning this competition :)
Just update sooner than last time, pleeeease!
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
After reading this chapter I have only one thing to say: "Go Gaara Go! Go Gaara Go!" (He's so adorable! <333)
I love your Gaara and how you describe what the characters are wearing - I'm such a sucker for that. I love Gaara's sense of style and multiple times I was jealous at the cool clothes you had him wear. XD
I love your Gaara and how you describe what the characters are wearing - I'm such a sucker for that. I love Gaara's sense of style and multiple times I was jealous at the cool clothes you had him wear. XD
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this really is fun! Especially this!
"…besides, I might even be a bit of a masochist."
XD
"…besides, I might even be a bit of a masochist."
XD
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chap, but I am still gungho Neji/Nar. Please don't put him with anyone else. There are not enough Ne/Nar fics out there. Maybe Gaara could hook up with Sas, or maybe not, they aren't very similar. Anyway, waiting for more Ne/Nar action, and Nar is being a little two timey, he could say no.
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!! another chapter!!! Naruto getting his tougne done is really brave to me (I'm deadly afraid of needles so I have no holes ^__^) Man, even when he's claimed he's getting kissed by everyone, poor Neji.....good luck Naruto and hopefully Itachi doesn't have a go!! (though I do have this feeling...lol) I can't wait until the next chapter!! ^o^