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I read this after I looked u up! I love ur Jin/Mugen story! I don't like this as much yet, (love Sasu/Naru) but Gaara is very much in character and as sadistic as always! And it will def be interesting to see where u are going w/ this-as Gaara and Naruto are lovers, but now Sasuke is back! Hope u update soon!

this fic is... odd...

rather plotless lemons.

are you gonna continue...

I kind of liked this story, but why is Sasuke so OCC-ish?

Nice story but I really don't think Sasuke would rarely be that gullible, off-guard, and easy to manipulate, without any fight in him. (or mental illness)

NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!

Whoa.I tentitively expected well,tongs and bamboo,heh. Glad to see things are a bit more complex then that.I do not know how happy he should be that no one saw him come in.He could always go walk about as anbu.I like these three as a triad.Has he killed Itachi?Is Itachi still missing a nin gang boy?(I hate gangs ergo armies,cowardly things)My way of saying is there going to be a voyuer(sp) in any of these proceedings? (maybe not deliberate) I am very glad to see you back.Thank you for the chap.May the muses(daemons?) be kind to you.

Ooh, I cant wait to see what happens next. I feel bad for Sasuke-kun.

i like it, i like it. Keep up the good work.

This story really surprised me. At first I was skeptical about how Sasuke gave in so quickly, and if Gaara and Naruto are together, then why is Gaara molesting Sasuke? Well, all these questions combined with the sexiness that is Gaara has gotten me really interested in your fic. I hope that you continue your story and keep it updated cuz I think that it can really go somewhere. Can't wait untl Sasuke is taken back to Konoha and Naruto comes into the picture. Keep writing!

I like the idea but the verbal abuse is killing it for me.(.When does he Pay Sasuke?Can't be a whore with out soliciting a fee.See the insult is invalid).I do see what you are up to and I am glad you are writing this.What is Naruto gonna do/say/think,?hehe can't wait.(,this stuff only works if the sub trusts the dom (to stick to his word threat or promice)otherwise there is no mind game just abuse/slavery so tricking someone you are trying to dominate by making it stupid for them to go for it and trust you goes against the whole idea. Just a thought.) I loved the first chap.I hope someone is gonna be in Sasukes side or are they gonna destroy him.Nooooooo.But everyone to their own absolution I guess.