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by Mayzen

schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi i have to say im loving your story it great. keep up the good work. i was also wondering if you could send me all the pics for this story and any u may have for the sequal to stephaniejacobs@live.com.au.

thanks
person Vague
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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person oohshiny
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NICE JOBU *nice guy pose* only things you got wrong were dobe(it means dead last) and oji-san (it means old man)
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am going to be really really lame and say that I LOVE this fanfiction! The characters both made up and otherwise were skillfully sculpted into marvelous additions to the original characters. Thank you for writing and entertaining my mind. ^_~
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dosn't kakashi teach naruto Rasengan...O.O
person Bealmira
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I noticed you were floundering quite a bit with the onigiri back there in chapter four. Since you didn't know a lot about the food, it probably would have been a good idea not to do anything about it. Oh well. I feel like enlightening you.

Onigiri is a traditional rice ball. Made from steamed white rice, it is shaped into palm-sized triangles. It's dusted with a little bit of salt, then wrapped in seaweed (or nori, if you feel like using the Japanese name) Sometimes the onigiri are filled. Pickled plums are used, or, for a sweeter taste, bean paste. Fish seasonings are used sometimes as well. Fresh fruit are not used in onigiri, so strawberries are a no, sorry. You did make a pretty good effort though.

I love the story by the way. The summon foxes and the Kyuubi being female is great. I like you work. Make sure you check your work a couple of times before you post it, I’ve noticed a few problems with homonyms and switches of tenses. If you need a beta reader, I’d be happy to help. Good luck, and keep it up! ^_^
person kai
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's over!! ;_; I'm so sad that it's over!! But i loved it and the lemon too!! XDDD Great fic!! write some more!!!
person Anon
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh, its over? you had better write that sequeal!*pouts*
and i loved that lemon.XD i loved how you made sasuke be the inexperience uke instead of naruto, like most fics.*gives thumbs up lee style*
i would love to see your pictures,so if you dont mind.....?
i am so looking forward to reading more stories that you have to tell. i cant wait!*glomps you*
well, until next time, good luck!

person vampchic
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no!i dont want it to be over!!!
you had better write that sequeal!
great job on the juicyness!XD
i would so love to see you pictures too! so please send!!
cant wait to read more of your stories.
until then, good luck!!!
seriously. sequeal. better write it!
person Ezj
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The sad thing is that it's over, the good thing is
that it were a great ending ^_^
Well be on a lockout for more of your things.
Oh and if it wouldn't be to much of a trouble
could you maybe resend the pictures cause
my anti-virus program went ballistic on me and
tossed all mails even if I wrote them myself --'''
It went so far I couldn't write cause the files
couldn't be saved on the comp...
I added a new mail that works better ^^'
Thank you and many horrays for your wonderfoul fic ^__^