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by Mayzen

schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a very nice story in fact I love it and I want a damn lemon grrr tear I need one lol update soon with lemon

Arry



person Demon
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW!!! update soon! this is so sweet! i love it!
person vampchic
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yup, diffenetly a good fic. and the last chapter really did clear up a lot of questions.
i am so curiouse as to what other things you will have happen next.
i hope that some juicyness will be coming up soon:P
cant wait to read more!
person kai
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i got the pics!! i like 'em!! great update btw!! but i want some action!!! ^^| UPDATE SOON!!
person Kieshar
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story...I only have one thing i want to say about this chapter....This chapter seemed like it was moving way too fast compared to the rest of your chapters. Almost like narrating rather than telling a story. Please don't misunderstand me....I REALLY like this stroy...just my two cents.
person Ezj
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IIIII this is such a good story... I know I know
thats not good review material but since I'm
not good at grammar I can't complain and since
I love the story so much as it is I will definitly
complain one bit ^_^
I would love to see those pictures =^_^=

person Serena
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy readying your fic. I can't wait till the next chapter comes out. I would love to see the pictures if you would please send the m to me. My E-mail is Alexsia613@hotmail.com. If you didn't already get it.
person Demon_Fox
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there !!! I absalutely love your fic!!! Keep up the good work!! ^_^ *smiles* I would greatly enjoy being a part of you fic. I would want to be a male character with long(down to his middle back), straight, black hair with red streaks, slitted yellow eyes(like Orochimaru's kind of-the purple eye liner stuff XP) and a pale complection, as for hi name it is, Tsume(first name) Kurohyou (Translates to "Claw Of The Black Panther") .... I do know that I want to have a black Panther Demon named.. Shunsoku (Fleet Paw) He is a serious demon.


By the way..... I have a picture that my talented room mate drew of Tsume so I can scan it and send it to you ^_^ .....^_~ *wink*

-SIncerely,
THe Demon Fox,
person Demon
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO!!! you have to update as soon as you get back ok!
person vampchic
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your story. i just love it.
who is kankimi to sesuke?? i kind of get the feeling that she is like a mother to him or something like that.
why did naruto get more peircings??
i cant wait to read more of what you have to write. i really hope that you update soon.
also i diffenetly think that you should write that sequel. just dont stop writing this one!!