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by Mayzen

person kai
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was cute!! i found it funny that sasuke didn't kno the meaning of the line and that naruto refused to answer!!! Hahaha, Kankimi-san & Itachi, hmmm, interesting. Update soon!!!
person kai
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh, i wanna see the pics you've drawn!!! I wanna see!! e-mail me and update soon!!!
sorry forgot to put this in my last review!! ^^|
person Not On Aff...yet
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK...Itachi kind of showed up out of nowhere...anyway...So good! Keep going!
Who is Houtai? Did I read about him and forget?
UPDATE SOON DAMMIT! Ja Ne!
person Demon
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! you updated and thanks for the pics...they were awsome thank you so much! and i loved the kissing bit!
person kai
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yea an update!! “You had me at hello, Sasuke.” ~ hahahahahaha, what movie was that from? Kawaii!! Update soon, i really like this fic!!!
person Tsugath
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Being a total Jerry Maguire hater, I have to say: "YOU HAD ME AT HELLO??" You couldn't come up with a better line? But other than that, love where the story's going. Are we going to get some SasuNaru action next chapter?
person Demon
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter put a huge smile one my face and i loved the bit with Tomoe fighting. i can't wait till the next chappy and hopefully Naruto will tell Sasuke how he feels and then they can have a big make out fest *smiles at that thought* well even if they don't have a make out fest i still look forward to the next chappy and what will happen. This is one of my fav fics and i can't wait till you update!
person Demon
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh and i was also hoping about those pics you mentioned earlier if you could send them to me?? my email is Demonic_angel_1234@hotmail.com
i really want to see them.
person kieshar
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow....I so like this story I was a fraid when you asked for ideas for the next chapters that i was think Oh shit, this next one is going to suck and man it did NOT. THank you. Update soon. XD
person daggat
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like this fic. it's interesting and original and your oc's actually don't annoy me in the least! keep writing and make me happy.

just so that you know, teme does not actually mean bastard (though bastard works as amusing replacement) but it's really just a very rude way of saying YOU!.