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An evil cliffhanger... MWahaha...
Don't worry not so corny. When I finally
understood what it meant... (brainmalfunction)
it's a reallly good line in here... at least with
the evil cliffie.... =^_^=

Hey, this chapter was awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter. Also, I was wondering if you could send me those pics you mentioned earlier. My e-mail is lotusblossom88@yahoo.com. Anyway hope to hear from you soon!

of course i'm a fan...i love your writing it's so cool nad unique i ebjoy reading this and it make sme smile please update soon

hahahaha! that's funny...i could just visualize Naruto with his angry big circle eyes and his mouth hanging open when he heard about the pranks. i love the emotions that naruto is giving off. sasuke's confusion should become more pronounced i think even with meiba's advice...maybe sasuke would get more jealous if gaara was hanging out with naruto more. i loved the part when kakashi and shikamaru chased down the bunshin, since they think that naruto has returned could there be more searches for him in the village? maybe kazan could be jealous that sasuke is spending more time on the "naruto searches" or something?

Poor Naruto! Don't cry! You'll get you Sasuke yet, just wait and see!

Still an absolutely thrilling story.
I think chakara spells chakra...
But anyway this story is really interesting
and new spirited so continue =^_^=

sorry! no ideas really! just please make sasuke figure out about naruto soon so they can... *says in dramatic voice* start building a relationship! I really loved the last chapter! It was so cute! especially with the twins at the end! great job and keep up the amazing work!

I really like the story so far. I don't always like OC's, but you managed to make yours in-depth and believable. In the next chapter you might want Naruto to get into a battle with and old rival, dunno who. I wanna see if he got any new skills. Please update soon!

This is a pretty interesting story. The grammer could use some work (perhaps a Beta would be in order), and a bit of the spelling was off. However, it is a rather well written story...
On to the next chapter...

(By the way, many people may have already informed you, but 'Dobe' actualy means 'Dead Last'...but Dumbass will suffice.

This was HILARIOUS!! *laughs*

Naruto? Mature? Oh my...