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by Mayzen

person Absolute--
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, but I have no ideas as of late. My brain has already been picked by my eldest sister and myself, and I can't seem to think up any other fresh ideas. Perhaps something interesting will pop into your or my mind...*thinks*
I think it'd be nice if Naruto was caught singing by Sasuuuuke-san...^^ Or something alond the lines of that...
An eating contest....Naruto provokes Sasuke...<---Because we all know it can be done. (And with that, you can go faaar...*dirty thoughts* Ahhh....*grins*)
person bhodi li
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you have already touched a bit on it. Naruto has told stories to his new family and they have imitated him. Since Naruto is a very good ninja he won't give away too many clues to his past identity but what if his new family members accidentally betray him but doing all of his old tricks? Leave a few red herrings for the Hidden Leaf ninjas to pick up and make it even more confusing as heck.
I also like the idea that maybe Sasuke is moving on to Kazan and giving up his love for Naruto. kekeke! Corny I know but it's kinda twisted with Naruto in there.
person Sukara
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Funny xD!! Keep up the good work!
person Demon
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!! i love your stories!!! please please please update soon i am addicted to your fic
person Ezj
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story you got there ^____^
can't wait for more
person ghostninja85
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, the bold coding must have been a pain in the ass to do for the chara bios.

Sasuke's reaction to the prank is a little OOC but I think you're going somewhere with that so it's OK.

Update as soon as possible. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person Billy
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Make this quick
OK
I loved it in every way got to go.
person Foamy
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly adore this fic...the only thing you should do is to read it through a few times before you post it so you don't have annoying spelling mistakes och grammar mistakes...you could get a beta reader if you think it's too troublesome to read it through yourself...but look after a beta reader who got the time to do it so you don't have to wait a month like I had to to put up the next chapter...^^

BTW Dobe means dropout or blockhead....but who knows? it's an insult anyway..

continue soon!

Hugs n'love!

Foamy
person hogo-chan
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was amazing! thank you so much for writing this! omg i really wanna know what happens now! could you pretty please update super super fast!? i loved this chapter soooo much! and it was so long! *squeals* your amazing! i love you forever!
person TenshiKaitou
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah ah, thank you very much for writing this fic. you just fix my daily ifx for Naruto fanfics, and such a long chappie too. Whoa. it is quite good in fact! please update soon!