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by Mayzen

person teaspoon
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it! it sounds interesting, I can't wait to see the update!
person Anon
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you need to update
its great
just make surre all the chaps are really long
person Tsugath
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AGH! That was great and I was left wanting more!! Update soon please!
person Sukara
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waiiiiiii!!! I love long chapters thought *Pouts* Keep up teh good work though!!! ^_^


Ja Ne
person ghostninja85
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is a very original and interesting story. Please update asap.

I just hope none of the OCs become mary sues. please be careful.

Finally, you're missing a few articles here and there and the verb tenses don't agree sometimes, but I like the story.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.