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for Step Too Far

by Saro

person Trinity7
schedule December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I had read Lines, but never this, and DAMN was I missing out. This is so well written and sexy and I love the way you write both of them. Wonderful job.
person MultifacetedTune
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really, really liked this -- it was a wonderful prequel, and quite well written!!! ^___^ Keep up the good work!!!
person blisblop
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It had to happen,,,I am surprised that scenes like this are not more commen.F'n A for you ,I really liked that.Great fit.
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot. Damn.

Seriously, that was good. Well written, and its FREAKING Naruto/Neji! Why aren't there more of those? And even better, I found it believable, even in the context of the series. There's just a certain tension between them, though mostly on Neji's part, and I think you capture their grown-up voices beautifully.

Great job.
person hogo-chan
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice! that was fscking amazing! please write more! that was so hot! *squeals*
person archermartyr
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MUST MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER! YOU HAVE BEEN COMMANDED!
person Washi
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Short, but damn that was tastey hot. Too much awesome.
person Catullus
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jesus H. Christ! Excuse me while I go take a cold shower, because that was one hot fic. There had better be more where that came from, you tease! I beg you on bended knee to some more. Really, I know I sound pathetic, but I don't even care- just so long as you write more. Please.....
person TenshiKaitou
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww, don't tell me it is a one-shot! it is so well-written that you must continue! moreover, the fic is sooooo hot too! do update!
person Kori Nibiki
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MMmm, yummy goodness. Never enough Neji/Naru, Naru/Neji. Awesome job. Do you plan to continue? I hope you do. There is much that can be done with that delectable tidbit. Ja!