rate_review Reviews

I thought it was a good story, I like the stories about itachi and sasuke.

I think you need a beta. And no, I will not forgive you for misspelling a word. This is the Internet, it has LOTS AND LOTS of sources. Im sure you could find the correct way to spell it. If you want to write stories, then get off of your lazy ass and do some work. Its not about posting it in here and seeing how many review you get. Its about actually doing some quaility writing, and making people ENJOY it, and not making it as hard for them to read it. Either your writing sucks, or you just didnt go over it at all. That, or you need a beta to help you. But dont think its the latter. I think you were just too lazy to actually go over it and fix your errors. So in other words... This story angers me, because it could have been so much better.

This is great. Yeah he's still a liar. ^^ I hope to see more work from you.

That last part about kites was pretty cool.Keep writing!

I really love this story.

not boring (read again)

awesomeness! too bad its a one-shot.... could you write more please? I thought it was interesting being written in Itachi's PoV and it was so... heartwarming and all that jazz! you really should continue it! theres so many different ways to go with it! it would be amazing!

Continue, plizzz...

Very cute -- I liked it!!! ^___^ Keep up the good work!!!

Yes, Uchihacest ^O^! And good Uchihacest at that X< yay! This is a lovely one shot, I felt that it was in character enough, such a sweet memory. Does Sasuke remember kissing Itachi nii-san I wonder^^~ Anyways, are in the Live Journal community of The Church of Uchihacest^^? If not, you should really do so^__^. Here's the link, but I'm not sure if it will even show: http://www.livejournal.com/community/churchofuchiha/