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person Kori Nibiki
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That. Was. Awesome. A truly amazing Naruto lemon. Very well written. I am looking forward to more of your work. Keep up the outstanding writing. Ja!
person dagget
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh, they knew! that's awesome! this was totally kickass. well written, not too ooc, right on buddy! (pats on the back) keep it all coming. i guess that was a pretty good challenge too. it's caused me much amusement. heheh.
person kawaii_kitsune_thief
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA! Exhibitionist Naru-chan! Cute and sweet in a strange way.
person lo
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so good. I don't know what to say. The characterization was great, the stroy line was great and it was hot. That rocked!!!
person patosan
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read this last night and it was just what I had been craving all day. I really enjoyed it.
person Tsugath
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hubba, Hubba! I love NaruSasu, especially if Sakura watches. Thought it was fitting about what Naruto told Sasuke. Sakura does come across as a little unobservant doesn't she?
person anubis
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
one word to discribe this: STEAMY!!! In my humble opinion it calls for a sequel, to was reaaaaaaaaally hot. Way to go
person Demon
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic!!!!!!! i cant wait to read more of your writing!!! and i cracked up in laughter when i read what Naruto whispered to Sasuke
person Erika
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY!! LOL...that was GREAT...oh man Naruto is EVIL...mwa hahaha...that was really good..>THANKS:D
person Jiro
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HUZZAH!!! The Author's note was HYSTERICAL!!!!!! LMAO! “If I take you like this Sakura will be able to see everything much better.” Seriously, I was clutching my stomach I was laughing so hard. Who knew Naruto was an exhibitionist? And Sasuke as a BOTTOM! YAY! That made me happy on a fundemental level ^_-

Sakura as a voyuer wasn't exactly what I had in mind, but it was definitely a fun, fun, FUN read! Thank you SO MUCH for posting it! I've been horribly sick for the past 3 days and reading fics like this are what gets me through (I need another hobby, eh?). GREAT JOB! I'll be looking out for more stuff from you! Thanks for replying to the challenge!

-Jiro