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Great Story! Finally someone made a Naruto fic where there is much more to Naru-chan than meets the eye in an interelly different way!
By the way, are you going to make Obito-kun tell Naruto that the Yondaime was his father? I mean, even if he said that he doesn't want to talk about his parents don't you think that he has the right to know that his dad was the man that sealed Kyuubi in him? Oh well, you choose. Since I like your story very much! Also, is Naruto-kun very graceful in his own home because he is in 'familiar territory' and he is clumsy in 'unfamiliar territory'? Or is it because he is normally graceful and just hides it from others? If so is it because Kyuubi is a fox demon (foxes are known to be elegant, graceful and beautiful creatures even if they are thieves)?
I read about your little problem concerning Yondaime's name. While I have read thousand's of fics where he is called Arashi (I thought it was a girls name since 1) Arashi means 'tempest' in japanese and 2) in X/1999 a FEMALE character's name is Arashi) I do not know if that is his real name. What I do know is that his nickname was the 'yellow flash of Konoha' since he was so fast that when he fought all that you saw was a yellow flash (probably his hair color). Since you might want his name to have something to do with speed I sugest you call him Hiei because 1) it means 'flying shadow' in Japanese 2) the meaning of the name is pretty close to the yellow flash description 'cause it means that the shadow is moving so fast it looks like it is flying and 3) Hiei is a character from Yuu Yuu Hakusho (an absoluto must read manga and must see anime) who moves so fast that all you can see is a black blur.

Hope that I have been helpful.

Iron Dragon Maiden at your service.

my oh my, I've been kinda ridden off of my emotions, since it's kinda late and all, so please, excuse me if, later at night or day, you'll be reading this review and it'll give you a heartattack....*cough* to the fic then..................................................speechless XDDDDD COOL COOL COOL LOVING THIS LOVING YOU IM GONNA DRAW YOU YET ANOTHER PIC WHENEVER YOU ASK FOR IT AND WHATEVER SHALL IT BE EVEN A YAOI SCENE EVEN A SMUT ANYTHING ANYTHING JUST ANYTHING!!!!!!!!!!! TTvTT I LO~~~~~~~~~~VE YOU SO~~~~~~~~~ MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*cries happily while slamming her head against the table* SO *slam* DAMN *slam* FAN *slam*FUCKING *slam* FANTASTIC *slam* AND *slam* ADDICTIVE~~~~~~!!!!!!*SLAM*......*fainst* x_x

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I really can't wait until the test. I want to know the diferences between canon and here.

Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

*twich* Lee and Ten-Ten in Gai suit? *shudders*
*chough* sooo...you where thinkin' about some diffrent pairings? I can only come up with really freky ones...um...like Konohamaru and The third?(that's the dear schizo part of me talkin...not fun to have him inhere all the friggin time! *bangs head on keyboard*)
Squee! Yondy-chan! What about Yondy and Kimimaru (way to hot to kill!!)? wouldn't be a problem if Yondy wasn't dead >_<... I wonder why there aint any ficcies about the legendary three and Yondy...*sigh* I sooo need to get out of here... But I think I'm stuck...Yep, I'm stuck...help anyone? hellooo!? is there anyone there?
Um...I'll just shut up and let you live your life...I'm so envious... d^^v

XP Mind telling me what that was? *points to your Author's babble that ended up being about the same length (if not longer) than the actual chapter* And I though -I- was insane.......... *sigh* Just to let you know, half of those "pairings" *shudders* made me sick just thinking about them!!! Eewwwwww.......... Tell me, are you -trying- to whore your characters??? Just because a character exists doesn't mean that you have to add them into your fic, expecially not be means of some sick, twisted, fucked-up sexual encounter!!! ^___~ Okay, I'm done ranting, lol. Oh, and I loved the "teaser" for the next chapter....... and yes, as sad as it was, that pun -was- inteded to be there. ^^ Speaking of, are you working on the next chapter for that, as well? *hopes so* Okay, well, I have to go -- ja ne!!! *goes back to doing "homework" -- a.k.a. working on answering your last review* ^___~

And just for the heck of it: d(^-^)b *snickers*

so thats the reason, eh? PMSing...I see...talking about PMS...I think Im about to have mine...MUAHAHA!!EVERYONE IN THE TOWN FUCKING BEWARE COZ IM GONNA TURN INTO A LUNATIC GONE GENIUS FOR 6 DAYS!!!!!!!!!!!AHHAHAHAHAHAAAAA...AAA...a..a XP anyways...about the pairings...MAKE OBITONARU PLS PLS OH PLS!!!!!!!!!!!! naruto needs a better teacher now doesnt he? and who better then obito? and also...what about the sand god sex gaara???EH??????WTF?????I hope you didnt forget about him OR IM GONNA JUMP ON YOU THROUGHT YOUR PC SCREEN WITH A PITCHFORK!!!!!!!!!!!!MUAHAHAHA!!HAHA...ha..ha....a...pitchfork????WTF???? O_o

“The one that says ‘Sasuke’ and has a kunai through it’s chest.” LMAO!!! HAHAHAHA! That's what I'd do too if I was Naruto. At least Sasuke still has a good sense of humor--for the time being. That was a good preview of the next chapter. Be sure to get it out, superfast, ok?
"Sand spook"--I've never heard him refered to in that way, and it's perfect! Random I know, but I really liked that.
Oh, and the Shino with sexy bugs...ewwwww... I try to figure out what to do with Shino, but I get freaked everytime I think of what Neji revealed to us. Bugs nesting in the body...yuck. I can't even stand them nesting in corners...
You have a very wonky sense of humor...makes the day more interesting.
I'm glad you decided to leave the chapter alone. Even if you didn't like it, it's still very good.
~Cheers~

I'm glad that you decided to continue this fic. Good luck!

I will confess that I was bypassing this particular story for a while because Kakashi is my absolute favorite character and, being in a depressed mood anyway, I didn't want to read something that had my favorite jounin dead. However, after reading what you've written so far, I really like your development of Obito's character. He has Kakashi's strengths and also manages to not fall prey to Kakashi's weaknesses as an instructor. The end result is that he seems to be a bit of a "superman" and a bit too good to be true. I really like the story and hope that you've got it all planned out because I've had more than one very promising series die out recently because the authors wrote themselves into a corner and couldn't get out without compromising their work up to that point. Push on - your work is appreciated and best of luck with your studies (I work at a university so I know what the students are going through at this time of year).

GreenEyes52

hay in the first part of the notes you get this really weird typing going how do you do that?????