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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh. This is going to complicate things for team 7.
The Jiraiya mention interests me. It's a shame it's spo far in the future.
Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
The Jiraiya mention interests me. It's a shame it's spo far in the future.
Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well writen. Loved it, diligently waiting for more.
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story... though so far it doesn't even seem like a lemon plot... I hope you do something different than Naru/Sasuke... everything is Naruto/Sasuke... What about a threesome? Naruto/Sakura/Sasuke? Or some combination with Obito? Or throw Hinata in there? Heh, plot wise I hope Obito makes Sakura catch a clue. She's got the potential to be a decent character, she just needs to get over her annoying fangirl tendencies....
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really love this story! first came across it on fanfiction.net, it rocks. i really hope u continue to update coz i can't w8 2 c what happens nxt. camping out for ur nxt chapter (hope it comes soon). cookies 4 you ;P
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK. So Sasuke knows about Itachi right now, and I guess that that means for an interesting first meeting with Obito. I'm looking forward to the next chapter dealing with that.
Oh, I forgot last review, but its Sandaime not Sondaime. San = 3 aka the third Hokage.
Update as soon as you can! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
btw, where is this cross posted?
Oh, I forgot last review, but its Sandaime not Sondaime. San = 3 aka the third Hokage.
Update as soon as you can! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
btw, where is this cross posted?
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh, keep up the good work. Btw the switching from English to Japanese is confusing as hell, not to mention they don't have correct translations. Japanese is multi language there are 3 ways of writing, and many words have different meanings dependent on what type of writing form is used. Btw Dead Last just doesn't compare to dobe. Something about it I guess. Anyways you can find the Japanese words and somewhat of English translations of them at Narutofan.com Also it has character list and etc.
I like the fic. Keep up the good work. It's just the English translations of the Japanese terms and titles don't work. Like how Hokage a title that means they are the strongest in the village doesn't match up to fire shadow. Kage is in all the 5 leader's titles of the 5 hidden villages in 5 countries. Like how Konohahagakure (sp) basically means Hidden Village in the Leaves? Anyways just thought you should know, since some diehard Naruto fans can be picky about the terms and titles, epecially Sasuke calling Naruto dobe, while it can mean Dead Last it doesn't really have a meaning at all, just a type of insulting term that only Sasuke uses and he only calls Naruto that.
There are SO many shounen-ai hints in this series.
Keep up the good work. coolsa.
I like the fic. Keep up the good work. It's just the English translations of the Japanese terms and titles don't work. Like how Hokage a title that means they are the strongest in the village doesn't match up to fire shadow. Kage is in all the 5 leader's titles of the 5 hidden villages in 5 countries. Like how Konohahagakure (sp) basically means Hidden Village in the Leaves? Anyways just thought you should know, since some diehard Naruto fans can be picky about the terms and titles, epecially Sasuke calling Naruto dobe, while it can mean Dead Last it doesn't really have a meaning at all, just a type of insulting term that only Sasuke uses and he only calls Naruto that.
There are SO many shounen-ai hints in this series.
Keep up the good work. coolsa.
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ummm, well, I broke my hand, so the next chapter is going to be a bit slow. I really should make an announcement. At least on aff.net. I guess I will now.
Sasuke was OOC, and although I don't agree that the loss of his revenge would descend him into psychosis that quickly, I can see it.
Did we see a little early manifestation of kyuubi's eyes also? I'm really looking forward to what happens to Naruto.
Finally, I know that this is way in the future, but I'm looking forward to how you incorporate Jiraiya into this universe. Naruto needs to know how to control Kyuubi's chakra and summon Gamabunta in order to defeat Neji and Gaara.
Update as soon as you can! (you really spoiled us with this rapid 3 updates in one day) I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
Sasuke was OOC, and although I don't agree that the loss of his revenge would descend him into psychosis that quickly, I can see it.
Did we see a little early manifestation of kyuubi's eyes also? I'm really looking forward to what happens to Naruto.
Finally, I know that this is way in the future, but I'm looking forward to how you incorporate Jiraiya into this universe. Naruto needs to know how to control Kyuubi's chakra and summon Gamabunta in order to defeat Neji and Gaara.
Update as soon as you can! (you really spoiled us with this rapid 3 updates in one day) I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOAH...that was damn good. wow...woah...i don't like suckara none either. but i hope that we all meet up soon or the boy's might kill each other^_^V
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
muahahah this is fun
I didn't know that Obito was that evil
I didn't know that Obito was that evil
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow..great story..i cant wait to see the next chappy! goodwork