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for If It Went This Way

by Kusachu

person akuma_river
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so Kakashi is dead. Damn, I liked the old eche. Anyways good start. Since this is the very beginning of everything they haven't formed their bonds. So it is interesting in seeing this "What If" scenero. Keep up the great work. coolsa.
person Kiri
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well the story looks good so far, but I'm getting bored of Naru/Sas or Sas/Naru. Maybe Kiba/Naru or Haku/Naru, anything other then Naruto with a Sharigan user.
person MistressofDragons
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see this fic here too! Looking forward to more.
person akuma_river
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So does Kakashi die instead, or do they all live, those of Yondaime's old team? Keep up the good work. coolsa.
person Yami Jay
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this Obito! This was actually very interesting. Good work.
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good enough to motivate me into actually signing in to review.

I love it. It's a extremely original idea and you write very well. I'm looking forward top Sasuke's interaction with Obito and Team 7's test.

I assume Obito received the Mangekyu Sharingan when he was responsible for Kakashi's death? Hopefully we'll learn more in the future.

As to the KakaIru, while I'm not opposed to that pairing, it really has no basis with in canon. SasuNaru NaruSasu on the other hand is a resounding yes.

Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.