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October 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I would love to read more of this story. I love it so far!
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, this story is really good, feel free to write longer chapters, lol. it'll be interesting to see how much angst you can put naru through before susu decides not to only feel bad about his own circumstances. sakura's concern is an interesting element, and i like that you kept tsunade out of explaining what is wrong, well for now at least. at some point someone will have to articulate how much pain naru has grown up with, but then again naru could make them realize, but a little outside perspective is always nice...maybe much further along in the story, lol. anyway, write what you want, but it's a good story.
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very cool story... its annoying when ppl rush right into things and have no build up.
i like the way you do it, as its more realistic in a way.
anyways, you have my curiousity peaked now, so i cant wait for the next installment!!
xx
i like the way you do it, as its more realistic in a way.
anyways, you have my curiousity peaked now, so i cant wait for the next installment!!
xx
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE DAMN YOU! please update soon!
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm me want more ^_^
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The only thing I'm upset about is that this hasn't been continued yet! This looks wonderful so far, especially how you've managed to keep everyone pretty well in character. Your writing's a bit choppy, but as you're new at this I'll forgive you. ^_^ This looks very interesting and I am eager to see where it goes. It really deserves more reviews! So, please update soon, and great job. Thank you for posting something that was so enjoyable.
~Chel
~Chel
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!! :DD
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...T.T...whaaa...its over....please write more soon...i can't wait to see what happens next...its very good thus far!
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! This is really good -- I can't wait to find out what happens!!! ^___~ Although I do have my suspicions......(*shifty eyes* .....Naru-kun was raped, wasn't he???) ^^;; Keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!! Ja ne!!!
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
who hurt Naruto cause i want to kill them for making him cry!!! aww i hope Sasuke finds out whats wrong with Naruto cause to me he is the only one who can comfort him. Of course i'm a big fan girl of SasuNaru so yeah ^.^ well update soon please!!! i love your work