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for Change of heart

by MarshDragon

person Arty
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dagan, so thins is what you have been writing... oooo
person Demon
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write more please i love your writing it i amazing and i cant wait for the update
person dead uchiha
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i like this fic! it's got me wondering about naruto as much as sasuke is!! Hee hee...
Keep going!!! *grin*
person Kori Nibiki
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A good beginning with an interesting twist of not letting the reader know exactly what happened to Naruto. I look forward to more. Ja!
person Maelik
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nah, it doesn't suck. It's really good and very interesting. Can't wait to read the rest of it.
person Rosemary
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sounds promising, update soon! Will it be someone we know who's abusing Naru-chan
person Jenny
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update as soon as possible... this sounds really interesting :>
person akuma_river
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. Keep up the good work. coolsa.
person hogo-chan
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hot damn! its not nice to leave us wondering! there were a few annoying spelling errors but i wouldn't worry too much about that! the story sounds really great! please update fast! ^_^
person Yum
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too short!!! I want moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore!!! I can't wait to read the rest!! I'm rather curious about how Sasuke will handle to learn that nruto is mistreated by fellow of their own village and doesn't fight back (anyway not with all his strenght).
Gambatte!!!