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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
about the quastion at the end take Kingdom hearts and by the way nice work*purr*
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi i like your fic
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi agian in the other review i forgot to type that you should do a Kingdom Hearts fic with a pairing of Ansem/Sora but this is only suggestion.
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snaps jaw shut* Wow. that was uh interesting. yeah interesting. there were a lot of grammer and spelling mistakes and maybe a format one, it was hard to read the text all bunched up. But good job, keep up the good work. coolsa.
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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I don't even have words.
And I don't mean that as a compliment.
I don't even have words.
And I don't mean that as a compliment.
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I second what ninjacat said.
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um...put spaces between your paragraphs please. I know AFF leaves out indents etc..but even if it didn't it would still be rather difficult to read.
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...great start! ^_^ I really like the way Naruto went right after Sasuke, he he. But, please, PLEASE add some spaces between paragraphs, it was so hard to read! >_<