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for Rosemary For Remembrance

by Sintari

person Less Wrong
schedule October 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well-written - I've not much more to say, but what I read all the way through, I generally try to review and compliment as appropriate.
person Trinity7
schedule December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*flails* That was the best Hyuuga-centric fic I have ever read. Your writing style is beautiful and I was so happy to find you here (I've read your yaoi stories on y!gal). This piece was just so heart wrenching and emotional and the details so well planned and the characters were so real... wonderful wonderful story. I think you ended it on just the right note.
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That Was The Most Intensely Beautiful Story I Have EVER Read.I Cried.It Made Me Depressed.The Impact Of It Was Phenomenal!Your Skills As A Writer Are Incredible.You Should Be Writing Books And Not Just Mere Fics!SO Melancholic.I Felt Hinata's Pain & Anguish.I Cried.Truly.That Was So Provocative And Mesmerizing And...Just Beautiful.
person ledfan
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* *sniff* so sad...
and beautiful...
DAMN YOU NARUTO! how could you do that to poor Hinata-hime?!?!
I was really hoping she'd confront him and he would repent.. or maybeshe misunderstood and naruto was taking out a little built up animosity out on the Uchiha but it seems like it was not ment to be...
only gripe is that I don't like Hyuugacest but thats just how I roll this is still a work of art no matter my opinion on the final pairing
GOOD JOB
person ledfan
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm gonna have to read a nice happy comedy now so I dont sink into a melancholy xP
person Kareem
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story.
person Nora
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I've just blown several hours of an evening that was supposed to be spent on my own writing, reading "Rosemary for Remembrance". This fic is absolutely fantastic. I thought at first that you were skipping through things too quickly, not spending enough time explaining strange jumps in the plot, but the pace turned out to be perfect -- gave the whole story the feel of a lifetime lived in 30 years or so. I also thought I would be squicked by the idea of Neji/Hinata fic, and was very pleased to be wrong.

I'm off to check out your other fics now. But I just wanted to say -- thanks. =)
person aethra-caelis
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written. I got lost at some points (like Naruto having an affair with Sasuke -- did I get that right? ^^;), but it all boils down to one lovely story. I like the way you portrayed Hanabi and Hiashi -- very tangible and very human, breaking the stereotype. I also like the "tension" between Neji and Hanabi -- poignant and striking. All in all, a wonderful read. ^_^ Keep it up!
person Jojo
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...you have a real talent; this was amazing.
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not even sure if you'll be able to read this review... but I felt compelled to write it. I just finished reading the whole story in one go. I couldn't help it... I couldn't stop. Words are insufficient to express how much this story moved and inspired me. I fear of sounding like an exaggerating fan-girl, but... I tell you, I'm not. I love the style and how it flows; the way it was written was simply magical. In the end, it makes you ache for more, even though the way it winded down was perfect. You played with the reader's emotions, made our heart ache, made us smile... I was THIS close to crying... but not because of the story or anything like that, but by how perfect it was (and I think the fact that I was listening to sad music while reading also had a contribution).

I do believe you've converted me into Neji/Hinata-ism. I used to be a Neji/Tenten fan.

Right now, I can only wish to be able to write like this one day.

One day.

I bow to your excellence.