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you are the greatest ever!!!!!

This story was perfect...I was shocked when naruto and Saskue were having an affair. And I liked the ending especially when Hinata cried. *sniffles*` I hope you continue writing.

This was simply amazing. You can't write dramatically over the entirety of a novella, it wouldn't work. Your development of the story and the characters was coupled with well-timed sucker-punches (can't think of a better way to describe them) of emotion that knocked me dead. I'm glad that you developed Narutos relationship with Hinata and I'm glad that you followed it through to its logical conclusion. You didn't demonise any of the characters (even Hanabi). Everyone reacted in an understandable, though often horrific way. You didn't rely on any of the standard conventions that apply to these characters but you did maintain their voices (wank-phrase right there).

I'm so glad I read this! This was wonderful!

Wow... That took me ages to finish reading... It was good

I've been left speechless, I've been hunting for a non-shallow Naruto FanFic and I'd like to personaly thank-you fo writing this. I really liked your use of vocabulary and choice of words. I to sometimes write FanFics and now that Ive read yours I have a goal to strive for. Continue with your god given talents because we need more writers like you.

Gah. ah. ah. ah.

I swept through this fic, needing and so hooked, in an evening. I am absolutely in love. The plot, with its twists and problems, left me often feeling as if I'd had the air slugged out of me. (I.E. for a moment, thinking Naruto had died (the head over the wall) ... LEE'S ASHES!... and I can't completely figure out if it was Sasuke jutsu'ed t'be Naruto, or Naruto smelling of Sasuke that had the.. encounter with Hinata, but either way, ahh!) the characterization is really completely perfect. The growth! The only person, of course, Naruto could be unfaithful for, be anything less than dotingly devoted to his choice, would be Sasuke,

It was just perfect. The cruelty without being a caricature or 2D of Hinabi, everything. I adore this. It's just lovely. Cements my unusual Hyuga preoccupation following sweeping similarly through the manga in too short a time. lovely. (I wonder if she'll be able to conceive with Neji?) On a less "Let me adore you in every way possible!" note, I liked the .. broad cover of time in sections, mentions of the future.. some awkward language, almost, but that just might be a stlye thing.

<3

You have made me hate Naruto. I didn't know it was possible for me to hate Naruto. Wow. I really really hate his guts. Hanabi too. I hate them very very much.

This fic is strange to me. Not in a bad way. Just in a strange way. It was so good, but I felt so detached. It left me feeling...I don't know. A bit empty. Yet the last line touched me. And that line in "The Color of Water: Part II"...that last line. Wow. But I'm still so empty inside.

I really don't know what else to say.

I love this story. You made me a NejiHina fan, seriously I went on a finding spree after reading this. I can't wait to see any future works you may do with this pairing.

Wow. This has to be one my all time favorite pieces of work. It's by far the best writing I've come across on AFF.net, and much better than most things I've read elsewhere.

The plot twists had me totally hooked, and I loved the way you portrayed the characters, I thought you captured them extremely well, not just from the aspect of the anime/manga, but I loved the additional facets you brought to their personalities. Hinata especially, I adored her in this, and despite me always adoring her, I thought the crying buisness was well put across, because that does seem like a piece of advice that would come in handy within that house, even we never knew this much in the canon.

The Sasuke & Naruto ordeal took me completely by surprise, so great work with that. Normally I can predict the outcome of stories and it just messes up the experience of reading through to the end, so this was quite refreshing.

Keep up the _great_ work!

This has been an excellent fic, one of the few I could've read without getting a headache because all the attempts of others to make a serious and complex story- lines for more than 10 chapters, yet this one… just made me hung up to every single word and every single line from it's beginning to it's end.

this is probably the reason I was taken by surprise when the story ended, I just couldn't believe for a few moments but you made it to end in a splendid way and I'm will be forever grateful to you, just because you wrote "Rosemary for Remembrance".