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TRULY a wonderful and wonderfully told story. All situations were very believable, and this has got to be one of the best Naruto A/U's I have ever read.

Just, totally fantastic.

There was never a point when I could stop reading, except for starting it. (xD!!!) The plot thickened and thinned and it still kept it's awesomeness. The sexual scenes were imperative to the story line, which I liked, because most you can just take out and it doesn't make much of a difference.

I will be sure to check out your other stuff, and once I return to AFF, this is the first story going on my Reccomendations list.

Yes, this was a great story! I've enjoyed reading every chapter. It was a long journey of independence for Hinata, but a journey well taken.

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I'm here again... and, well, I just couldn't read through all of chapter 9 o_o Ew ew ew, bad mental images... I know, I'm stupid, but I started feeling bad, really bad... it actually reminded me of when I started reading fanfiction and I'd read X-Files fics, scenes with Mulder and his ex (that... evilbitch) and I would get this same really bad feeling... weird o_O I should have skipped it and just gone to the next chap right? Anyway, someday I'm sure I'll continue reading this, but then I'll remember not to read chapter 9 again... tooo much angst.. and bad mental images (not the sex itself, just... Hanabi being a bitch) >_< This fic is gonna give me a heart attack, I swear (or a broken heart). But well written it is, you know that! But ouch my heart... I need a break to forget the mental images...

this is one of the best hyuga-centric fics ive read in a long long time. your characterization is close to perfection, particularly neji, and i also luv the way you've molded hinabi's character. your narrative is wonderful, theres something very dark, elusive and at times ominous about it - its hard to describe but sometimes the voice of the narrative seems almost impassive which i think suits the hyuga-centric-ness of the fic very well. also, the imagery is so vivid, and the symbolism really does add to the depth of the chracters and story. plus good plot twists with the lastest few chapters - luv how you've developed character relationships from their early childhood innocence to something very dark and twisted - ie. naruto/hinata/sasuke

definitely one of the best hyuga fics out there. i hope you update soon - cant wait for the next chapter ^__^

i don't have much to say that i haven't yet said in my other reviews. i'm still completely in awe with your fic and infinitely appreciative that you updated so soon. naruto and sasuke....i was wondering when that would come up. I felt that Naruto's reaction was very appropriate, and the way he had sex with her afterwards...I just thought it was fitting. Honestly, the feeling that I get after reading a chapter of this story is so inexplicable...all I know is that you must be a talented writer to evoke such emotions. I seriously don't review unless something has touched me, and the fact that I review every time another chapter pops up should speak for itself. Thank you so much for this great contribution you've given to the Naruto fandom.

Wow, what a well-crafted story! Your effort and time really show - I truly enjoyed reading!

... poor neji... how i wish i could make him feel better... *stares hungrily...*

this story is VERY good, your writing style is impressive, and the way you set out scenes and dialogue.... 'tis very nice (that scene with naruto and hinata at the lake... meccha ii...)

hinabi's character is one thing that surprised me - though i was kinda thought that since she is the younger sister, and so in spite of seemingly having much better skills, she will not be the heir and so therefore be just a teensy bit annoyed, for her to be this malicious... well, i'm not complaining. i still feel sorry for neji though. can't get hinata, instead gets the scary teeth-licker (hey, i do that as well.... hmmm...)

keep it up, i'll be waiting ^^

wow...this was a twist that was a little unexpected but very good all the same. i'm very impressed by your take on Hanabi. I felt like that last chapter before was so sad with Hiashi's death, and now it doesn't seem like it's going to get any better. hinata and naruto's relationship is now just heartbreaking, which is such a contrast to what they had before. i love the sex scene between hanabi and neji, not because of the smut, but because of the way you portrayed neji. i thought it was completely in character, and very much the way neji would have reacted to the situation. grrr to hanabi. she's one evil lil girl..well, i guess not little any more...i really wish that neji wouldn't have to suffer so much, but at the same time, what makes your fic great is how harsh (yet real) it all is. this fic is definitely one of the most unique stories i've read, and written by a very daring author who's willing to challenge the reader and isn't afraid to give them what they don't want. i love the fact that all of this sadness is written for the sake of the story and not for the reader. please continue writing this way. not many authors are willing to take such huge risks in terms of story line and such. it's wonderful. please update soon.

I really enjoy this story. I wish a giant 2 ton weight would drop on Hanabi's head though. Well I suspect Neji thinks the same thing. I feel bad for Hinata's inability to carry a child to term. It would be lovely if there was someway Hinata could smack some sense into her younger sister, but that's not going to happen. Thanks for updating this story. It had been a while since the last update.