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I'm so happy that you updated! It's been so long! Man, your story breaks my heart. It's so very well written and really inisghtful. Unlike other fics, it's not all fluffy, but so frighteningly realistic. I think you do a great job justifying Hanabi's actions and describing her personality. I hope Tsunade can do something to help the Hyuuga clan now that Hanabi is the heir. I kind of wish we had more Neji in this chapter, but otherwise it was great. It was very heartwrenching. I can't help but feel for Hinata. I think you're doing a great job and hopefully updates will come more quicly next time.

I didn't know you'd email me o_o I mean you have like 90 reviews on ff.net... anyway, of course I am still reading this! I love this story ^^ It was a stupid thing to say that I'd stop reading it, I was just sad and overemotional =P I love reading your Neji, it feels SO nice after reading some... not so well written Nejis I see around ~_~ Even if I go: aww poor Neji... Can't wait to see what happens next! Though it's been a long while since I've last seen/read Naruto so I can't really give decent reviews... sorry, hope I'm not bothering you ><'
And yeah, I saw Protect Me From What I Want at your profile, and I 've been listening to Placebo almost everyday so I had to ask ^^'

...Now that I think about it, I didn't know cousinxcousin relationships are considered incest o.O Er sorry, random thought...

I've read this entire story three times so far. It's gotten to me.

interesting story... very well written. you've done a wonderful job with the pacing and flow of this.

Incredible. Why are you writing fanfics? You should be making things you can sell to millions. I want more damn it!
I didn't particular like the way it was in present tense but that's just me being a hardass, and I doubt the emotion would have came through as well otherwise.

What can I say.... you obviously have a lot of talent, I love how subtly(sorry if I can't spell) you write the most intense things. It's hard to find anything half this good, and I really like the style of writing, definetly different... though I read the latest chapters only out of curiosity, because it has been torture to me to see Neji like that ;o; Is Hinata that dense? It culminated with the last chapter, seeing her wedding, it's too sad for me, so I'll probablly stop reading here (I don't know if you plan on writing more). Yeah I know, I have a weak heart, can't take too much angst. I'm usually fine with the Naruto/Hinata but it just feels.... not right...in this story. It felt like a tragedy was happenign and not a romance. Maybe it's just how you wrote them, but it makes me question my like for the pairing iself, it seems their relationship would never be very deep or doesn't have much meaning... oh well. I guess I'll just stick to my Neji/Hinata. But still, I hope you write more, I loved reading this.... feel free to complain about this review if you want ^^' (silly question, are you a fan of Placebo too?)

Wow, I am up way past my bedtime, glued to the computer screen reading every last word of this beautiful, finely crafted story. This is wonderful. So many subtle and lovely moments are in this story, in your narrative, in the slow, natural development of your characters, in the clear visuals that your writing evokes. It's just knock-down fabulous. I eagerly await more of this story, though I could see it ending even right here and I would sigh with contentment. How wonderful.

Wow, your writing is really moving. This is all making me really sad. I know I should be happy for Hinata and Naruto, but poor Neji!!! Is he going to be seeing happiness any time soon is this fic? Regardless, I love the story anyway. It has a tone to it that is very different from other fics out there. I love it and I hope that you'll update soon. And maybe Neji will be a little bit happier? I just love him so much that it pains me to watch him suffering.

I've read many fanfictions-most of them poorly written-but many still good. But I have to say, you are a very talented writer. I don't think I've read a story written quite as well as yours. It is excellent, so please keep up the wonderful work and please update-as I will continue to read and follow your story.

I really love this fic. Really really do. It's one of my favorites.....ever.