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for Breaking Sasuke *Completed*

by megladon129

person Foamy
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was really, REALLY good....I was hoping for some action and I got some! hmm...no wait....Sasuke got some...almost..^^

I SO LOVE YOU!

hugs foamy
person dagget
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was too cute! i just love a sexually frustrated sasuke! yay!!! you make me so happy. i didn't stop grinning all the way through that. keep it cumming! heheh well you know what i mean. luv ya:)
person twisted-sheets
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! THAT WAS SO HILARIOUS! I LOVED the striptease! MORE! MOOOOOOOOOOORE!
person Anon
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, it's only a three part story?! ;_; *wibble*
person clowangel
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! Great chapter! ^^ Hot ending too! I can't wait until it gets even hotter. ^^ It will get hotter right?
person ghostninja85
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. Very interesting. At first I thought that Naruto knew what he was doing to Sasuke. However, I can also see him being totally oblivious.

Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to part 3.
person shinizero
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I lovelove this chapter >D Can't wait to see the fallout from all this *heh* Keep up the good work--it's a very fun read (aaah, I adore your Sasuke especially...)
person ichaicha
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loving it. Characterization and pacing are both very good, I look forward to more chapters of this. ^__^
person Nudd
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT stuff! Can't wait too read more. I'm too tired to give a proper review but this seems like a REALLY promising fic!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!! OMG, this is -such- a neat idea!!! Yay!!! ^___^ I absolutely love it!!! Very kewl, and well written -- I can't wait to find out what happens!!! Keep up the good work, and update ASAP, k? Ja ne!!!