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for Breaking Sasuke *Completed*

by megladon129

person Erika
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was AWESOME...hehehe...I loved it can't wiat to see where you are going to take this...THANKS:D
person Demon
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!....i love your writing you are really really good and i can't wait for an update.
person lillilly
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories I've read on AFF. I can't wait to see what's going to happen, and I love the fact that it almost seems like Naruto is doing this to Sasuke on purpose. Sitting on him, inviting him to dinner and talking about Sakura (maybe to gague his reation). It would be nice to finally see Naruto as the cunning one who gets the point even when people think he dosen't. Anyway, I am enjoying the story, it's a masterpiece in the making and can't wait to see what happens next.
person GS*
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww.... poor sasuke!!!!! they must get together! *determined look* ....yea. lol. i really like the story line. really wanna c where it goes on from there!!!! yay! up date soon!!!!!! woohooo! n_n
person Baka_Tsu
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This seems to be taking a rather interesting turn ;D Really nicely written ^^ Love the story so far! UPDATE! xD <3
person Stranj100@yahoo.com
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic. I'm glad you haven't turned Sasuke into one of those over obessive, abusive, stalker types. I eagerly await the next part.
person esca
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WEEEE CONTINUE CONTINUE
person shinizero
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see more of this :) I love your characterizations in this--especially Sasuke. Feels very right.
person Polka dot
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh funny and angsty, great combo.
person Sukara
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter!! ^_^ You gonna make chapters? I hope you do!! Keep up the good work!!

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